--Elite Writer Alias: MuckyMuckpoop Name: Mitchy Mannino ASL: 21/M/IN Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2353 Life Story: Siddhartha. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 3 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5312 D 14.55 Years 1.46 Decades 177.07 Months 758.86 Weeks 5.312000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "Mother natures a whore," said the shotgun to the head.
Well indeed a adventrous weekend calls for an adventrous reminiscence. Well then again I guess its not that adventrous, just a good ol' fashioned birthday party at my dads. Throwing back a few beers with good friends is never a bad thing to accomplish in a weekend. I had the majority of my buds show up from work..etc..and just close friends...etc.There was really nothing extremely overwhelming, a bit of the casual drama that is expected from any group..etc..etc.
So I've been thinking about my major a lot, Mathematics and im swithing to Acturial Science..and a friend of my Dad's kind of detered me from it. He kind of just degrading the job, and said its not as good as what it is made out to be. It basically crushed my idea of this amazing degree that I was going to get and made me second guess myself. Grrrr...I had make life choices!...well these public journal entries are random and completely pointless since I'm not writing down anything that has that much meaning to me...just some minor things that I wish to complain about :). yea...
Yes a Bolero is a spanish dance, but it is also the name given to the music in which the dance is intended to be done to. So essentially... A Bolero could also be the musical score composed specially for dancing to.
and yes, I actually was asking for the lies to continue to sustain a particular relationship. It'd take a lot to explain, so i'll just let it stand alone.
i wanted to thank you for taking your time on commenting on my poem and showing me where i needed improvement. I agree whole heartily on how it sounds more clichéd to use butterflies. I actually have written this poem last night, a request of a friend of mine on his crusade to write about beauty or break it down and such. To be completely honest i had no clue what i was writing and i just now understood what i was trying to get at. and mostly the hair compared to a edible substance...hhaha this is going to sound lame but i was hungry when i wrote that *cough* I agree also with the lacking of emotion, it seems more distant from the emotional aspect than i would have liked. Considering when i come back on around midnight im going to work some more on this piece and thank you again for showing me what i should be looking for as a reader your view is very much appreciated. Well hon, considering i've rambled on and on about my piece when all i ment to do was thank you for your comment, and considering im to lazy to just delete everything i typed up i'll let you go now ^_^
If there is a poem you would like me to look at, please leave the title on my page and i will gladly have a go at it.