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    Hey.......Blackphoenix here...........just wanted to say thanks for that comment you wrote a while ago!
    | Posted on 2008-10-30 01:49:21 | by Blackphoenix14 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Kate, sorry, forgot to mention what I meant by "scanning".

    The reason why I said that was because I felt it didn't "keep the beat" all the way through. I thought in the last verse there was a line where there were too many words crammed in, which spoilt the flow. However, this was a relatively minor thing, as I thought the poem overall was good. Hope that helps!
    Alex
    | Posted on 2008-10-17 12:56:29 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks, glad you liked it! I liked your Depression poem which I read recently. As far as other stuff like "Perfect 10" goes, I am about to submit a "sequel".

    Cheers
    | Posted on 2008-10-17 12:44:48 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment of My Father's Throne. I appreciate your heartfelt sentiments and I agree with your completely.

    Your Friend in Christ
    Ben
    | Posted on 2008-10-16 12:15:43 | by BenCollier - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for reading!
    | Posted on 2008-10-14 17:06:51 | by Demon__666 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for your comments, poetry is not always what you think it is
    | Posted on 2008-10-13 18:11:52 | by gjenkins - [ Reply to This ] -



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