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Name: Kate Doherty
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 THE ART OF RELAXATION
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 A PAIN IN THE PROVERBIAL
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 GROWING
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 THE MILL OF LIFE
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 I LOVE YOU
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 COMPUTER GAMES
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 SERENE MORNING
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 WOODLAND
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 COME HOME MY CHILD
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 WHY
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 DEPRESSION
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 SECRETS
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Hey.......Blackphoenix here...........just wanted to say thanks for that comment you wrote a while ago!
| Posted on 2008-10-30 01:49:21 | by Blackphoenix14 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hey Kate, sorry, forgot to mention what I meant by "scanning".

The reason why I said that was because I felt it didn't "keep the beat" all the way through. I thought in the last verse there was a line where there were too many words crammed in, which spoilt the flow. However, this was a relatively minor thing, as I thought the poem overall was good. Hope that helps!
Alex
| Posted on 2008-10-17 12:56:29 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks, glad you liked it! I liked your Depression poem which I read recently. As far as other stuff like "Perfect 10" goes, I am about to submit a "sequel".

Cheers
| Posted on 2008-10-17 12:44:48 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thank you for your comment of My Father's Throne. I appreciate your heartfelt sentiments and I agree with your completely.

Your Friend in Christ
Ben
| Posted on 2008-10-16 12:15:43 | by BenCollier - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for reading!
| Posted on 2008-10-14 17:06:51 | by Demon__666 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
thanks for your comments, poetry is not always what you think it is
| Posted on 2008-10-13 18:11:52 | by gjenkins - [ Reply to This ] -



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