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Thanks for your comment/essay on my poem haha. Don't worry about it being so long, it's very flattering when someone analyses a poem properly like that. I'm glad that u could see what I was trying to get at with the natural and artificial. You're probably right, I do use too much alliteration and I even noticed this as I was writing it, but I think that's sort of my style, because I really like alliteration personally, and it probably came across as a bit overwhelming.
Sorry for the late reply, I haven't been on the sight in week or two.
Thanks for your comments on my poem, "Freedom." They were great. I'm sorry if I did not get back to you right away. My father has died and I haven't felt like reading or writing. He'll be buried this Friday September 1st. I'll be atending his funeral and will only be answering my e-mails until Sunday. Pray for him. USGlen