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    Journal: Winter
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Sunshine and crisp cold air is my kind of weather :-)


    ...Created 2008-11-04 17:23:34     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Hey Kate
    Thanks for your comment/essay on my poem haha. Don't worry about it being so long, it's very flattering when someone analyses a poem properly like that. I'm glad that u could see what I was trying to get at with the natural and artificial. You're probably right, I do use too much alliteration and I even noticed this as I was writing it, but I think that's sort of my style, because I really like alliteration personally, and it probably came across as a bit overwhelming.
    Sorry for the late reply, I haven't been on the sight in week or two.
    Cheers,
    Gid.
    | Posted on 2008-11-22 03:01:57 | by Giddy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Your comments on my Midnight Bazaar I thought were excellent! Thanks a million!!!! michael
    | Posted on 2008-11-04 20:32:04 | by Algol46 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Welcome to ELITESKILLS!!!
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-08-23 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Kate welcome to ELITE SKILLS!!!! na thanx for all the nice comments they mean alot to me keep rockin that music

    much LOVE
    James
    | Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by James Reyna - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comments on my poem, "Freedom." They were great. I'm sorry if I did not get back to you right away. My father has died and I haven't felt like reading or writing. He'll be buried this Friday September 1st. I'll be atending his funeral and will only be answering my e-mails until Sunday. Pray for him. USGlen
    | Posted on 2006-08-29 00:00:00 | by usglen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    first of all welcome to eliteskills. then thanks for your comment on "your lost, not mine". i know what you mean about the girl always being the one. if hurts like hell anyway.



    ~sweetme
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by sweetme16 - [ Reply to This ] -



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