Thanks for your comment on "Little Red". I really appreciate, and I generally have little to do with punctutation, but thanks for the suggestion! I'll definitely check out something of yours. Peace and inspiration!
Aside from changing the last line completely, hours is actually only one syllable according to http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/hours , please help me clarify as they usually get it right, the additional plural doesn't necessarily condone another syllable, especially if we're dealing with just adding "s", which in all of the words I've used plurally with just "s" added, it does not junction into another syllable. So as far as syllables are concerned, it should be correct.