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MystMaker


Name: Sara G
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"When the game is over, the King and the Pawn go back in the same box..."


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Writing something that means alot to you is difficult, to say the least.

Struggling....hopefully, it will turn out.


...Created 2007-01-03 16:00:11     [ View Past Journals ]

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Thanx4 your comment on 'Giant'! It was 1 Nov 07. I was away a lot and I don't think I responded, but you're a fine reader and I appreciate your words.
| Posted on 2007-12-23 23:04:33 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
  
About 'Paradise Come' - your reply to my comment - After I wrote "What's the difference between sensational journalism and poetry?" I tried to answer the question for myself. Surely there's a great difference?? But I couldn't work it out. I guess they are both even descended from song and dance! Glad I'm just a poet and not a scholar because this question would have me flummoxed .... the only thing I could come up with is: "Poetry is supposed to have less bulshyt." But that's probably too optimistic!
| Posted on 2007-05-28 00:01:21 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for comment on 'giant'. For meaning, try taking it literally until the last couple of lines ... a lot of pomes are like that: a visual scene with characters (or whatever) is built up, and then in a final 'turn', the poet comments on that and points out more or less what the play refers to.

Comments are teaching me that lots of people's reading don't work the same as mine does! It's sometimes a function of age, sometimes of nationality, sometimes of religion, sometimes type of education .... that is, always some kind of cultural difference, but, wonderfully, all clearly shared in the many flavours of English! What a mighty language!
| Posted on 2007-01-12 19:15:54 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
  
thanks for the comment, looking back on it now... the ending does lack something.
| Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by butterfly wings - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thx fer the comments...i shaped up my poems a bit...
and about the comments any coloquialisms and breaks in rythm and pattern were probably intended, but you dint know that, so it's ok...
Imajen Dat
| Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by beninbrasil - [ Reply to This ] -
  
mythologically- Now it is:)
Have a Nice Day.

Yours Truly,
Argos
| Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by Aruemos - [ Reply to This ] -



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