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    Name: Dawn
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    Journal: All about me
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    Mood: Wierd...
      
    I know this is long, but it takes a lot to et to know seomeone......soi here you go. (Yes, it is the same as the submission, All about Me, but someone hadn't seen it and wanted to know all about me so here you go.)

    My little brother came to me one day and had started asking me questions over my favorite things. I never knew that many people knew so little about me…..especially those close to me. So I thought I would take the time and write (Or type) my favorite things and what makes me tick, even the little things count, too. If anyone has anything to add, please ask and I will add it to the list. If the listing has more than one thing, then it is probably categorized differently. (Ex. Tea, Coffee, Mellow Yellow = all the time, mornings, sodas)

    My favorites
    Drink: Iced Tea
    Coffee – 1scoop sugar, 3spoons creamer (Depends on the cup)
    Mellow Yellow
    Fruit Punch Noz
    Fruit Punch Majestic
    Black Cherry Water

    Religion: Wicca/Christianity....don't ask it's complicated to explain.

    Food: Anything Chocolate ^_^
    Fettuccini Alfredo
    Burgers
    Pizza
    Cereals
    Biscuits

    Color: Black
    Red
    Blue
    Lime Green
    Purple
    Orange Sunburst
    Turquoise Blue

    Book: Anything Fantasy
    Mystery
    Historical Romance
    The ones I write (Separately or with my Mother)

    Movie: The Phantom of the Opera
    Sweeny Todd
    Lord of the Rings
    Never Ending Story
    Avatar
    Twitches Saga
    Twilight Saga
    Cats (Yes, the musical )
    Anime (Enough Said)

    Music: All kinds. I was raised to appreciate it all. (Although I am a little sketchy with
    Elvis Presley and I do not like the Beatles ^_^ )

    Singer: Dolly Pardon
    Trace Adkins
    Allison Kraus
    John Michael Montgomery
    Brad Paisley
    Jesse McCartney
    Justin Beiber
    Michael Jackson
    Avril Lavigne
    And more….

    Band: Def Leopard
    AC DC
    Big Time Rush
    Dream Street
    Black Sabbath
    Brooks and Dunn
    Montgomery Gentry
    And More…..

    TV Shows: Anime of all kinds
    Some Cartoons (Depends on mood and what is on)
    NCIS
    CSI
    Singing Bee
    Miami Ink
    Ace of Cakes
    Food Challenge…

    Cars: Mustang
    Neon
    Grand Dam
    Pick up
    Eco
    Prius

    My Quirks: *I cannot sleep without a fan on high (No matter the weather) and/or music playing.
    *I love to mix weird things for food, like sour cream on a corn dog, honey mustard in macaroni and cheese, a ham sandwich on a blueberry bagel with grape jelly. I know that it is weird, but it is me.
    *I absolutely cannot stand mushrooms, spinach, asparagus, or white beans.
    *I like to let my childlike side a lot; it lets me feel more freedom.
    *I will randomly think of a joke and most likely end up laughing out loud when I shouldn’t or just a t a really random time.
    *I will most likely be found with a book, sketchpad, music player, or on the computer. I am pretty much predictable in that category.
    *I do not know how to cook very much, but when I want to, I can make a meal.


    Flower: Roses
    Orchids
    Lilies

    Scent: Lavender
    Apple Cinnamon
    Mulberry
    Sage
    Citrus

    Quotes: -“I will play the swan and die in music.” William Shakespeare
    -“I am Connor McCloud of the clan McCloud. I was born in 1618 in the village of Glennfinen on the shores of Loch Shiel, and I am an Immortal.” Highlander
    -“Ever heard the New York Echo? You yell ‘Hello’ and the echo yells back ‘Shut the fuck up.” Gunz Ablaze
    -“I am the voice of your hunger and pain..." Celtic Woman
    -"A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked." Bernard Meltzer
    -"It's time like this you stop and go; ‘What the fuck!?’" Gunz Ablaze
    -“Work hard now so you may work smart later.” Mom


    Here is a survey I filled out on Fanfiction. My account name is Mythica_Vampiress319 and I only have one story up, but I think it is a good one, try and read it sometime. Maybe if someone asks I will post here on ES.

    TELL ME ABOUT YOURSELF - The Survey

    Name: Mythica...is actually a nickname I earned. ^_^

    Birthday: 319 years ago (September is 320 years)

    Birthplace: Manoria Manor

    Current Location: In hiding....Shh!!

    Eye Color: Green, Hazel, Brown, Gold. They change with my mood. Mother calls them my "Tiger eyes."

    Hair Color: Dark choclate brown with small maogany highlights that show in the sun

    Height: 5'5" ( I want to grow!! One of my little brothers is only 15 and he is 6'3" I can't win!)

    Right Handed or Left Handed: Right Handed Dominantly

    Your Heritage: Where to start? Sigh I have many here goes...Cherokee Indian, Irish, Scottish, French, German, Welsh, and White. I was born a beautiful Olive color, but I paled out, now I look white...

    The Shoes You Wore Today: Flip Flops. Best. Shoes. Ever!

    Your Weakness: A good fantasy story or a chance to paint something.....Or Chocolate.

    Your Fears: Never being loved for who I really am.

    Your Perfect Pizza: Really? That is a question? Okay...Meat lovers with pineapple, banana peppers and garlic butter...stuffed crust.

    Goal You Would Like To Achieve This Year: To finally come out of my shell, be who I am, and to show the me from the inside on the outside. And to make it through college registration.

    Your Most Overused Phrase On an instant messenger: Pleasant Nightmares

    Thoughts First Waking Up: It's too early for this crap....

    Your Best Physical Feature: Either my eyes or my smile...

    Your Bedtime: Depends on the day of week and time of year...no Honestly!

    Your Most Missed Memory: My pet Chow Chow Grizzly...and My Shelti Princess. R.I.P. guys, miss you.

    Pepsi or Coke: NoZ

    McDonalds or Burger King: McD's fries, BK's Whopper, and a Blizzard from DQ! Perfect outing!

    Single or Group Dates: Single...I am old fashioned when it comes to dating...

    Lipton Ice Tea or Nestea: Lipton...but I still prefer NoZ ^_^

    Chocolate or Vanilla: Dark Chocolate Bear Claw Ice Cream...Yay! Or Moose Tracks >.>

    Cappuccino or Coffee: Coffee is okay...but yet again...NoZ FTW!

    Do you Smoke: Absolutely not. My mother does and I find that I cannot breathe that way. It is a bad habit that should never be started...

    Do you Swear: Yes...What? No one is perfect >.>

    Do you Sing: Yes, I sing. I love to sing random songs, but also sing things from musicals like Sweeny Todd or Phantom of the Opera. But I sing Disney things and other songs, too.

    Do you Shower Daily: Sometimes I do miss a day, but I make up for it by not missing the next. I have a busy life...

    Have you Been in Love: ...How do you know when you are truly in love?

    Do you want to go to College: Yes, to either be a Pharmacist or a Sonographer...all ready excepted into a college. WKCTC

    Do you want to get Married: One day yes, but I want to make sure I have a career set so that I may take care of my family.

    Do you belive in yourself: In certain things yes, but not in everything...

    Do you get Motion Sickness: Not all of the time, mostly just if I have not eaten and I drive all over hills all day...

    Do you think you are Attractive: Honestly...no. But I am told all the time that I am. I don't know, I guess it's just because a lot of the guys I hang out with look at me like a younger sister...it kind of messes with me...

    Are you a Health Freak: I restate the Choclate Bear Claw Ice Cream...No, I love food, even if it is not healthy. But there are some I cannot stand. >.<

    Do you get along with your Parents: My mother...96% of the time, yes. My step father used to be the same way, but now it is like...32% of the time, and that is pushing it...

    Do you like Thunderstorms: Yes, that is Mother Nature's Lullabye for me as she sings to me her lovely songs...

    Do you play an Instrument: 3 chords on the piano, and I sing...I want to learn harp or the haprshichord. Such lovely instruments.

    In the past month have you Drank Alcohol: No, I do not drink, never have, and most likely never will.

    In the past month have you Smoked: No, I stay away from things like that.

    In the past month have you been on Drugs: No, again I staw away. I have seen what drugs do to people.

    In the past month have you gone on a Date: No...

    In the past month have you gone to a Mall: No, cannot really afford the mall that often.

    In the past month have you eaten a box of Oreos: Yes, but I was sharing with some friends.

    In the past month have you eaten Sushi: No, never had it, but I do wish to try it.

    In the past month have you been on Stage: No, but I was in my High Schools fall Talent show of 2009. I sang "The Little Girl" by John Micheal Montgomery. Beautiful song.

    In the past month have you been Dumped: No, I have not been in a relationship since the day before Thanksgiving.

    In the past month have you gone Skinny Dipping: No, I don't do that kind of thing...O////o

    In the past month have you Stolen Anything: No, never.

    Ever been Drunk: No, but I did get car-sick one day and my mother thought I had a hang over from the night before, when all it was was I had the flu.

    Ever been called a Tease: No.

    Ever been Beaten up: My cousin used to beat me up growing up if I didn't play games right...Now my younger brother tries, but I put him to the floor every time it happens.

    Ever Shoplifted: No.

    How do you want to Die: I wish to be returned to my God and Goddess with the Pentagram drawn around me as I have died peacefully in my sleep. I will be given back to the Earth and be reborn anew with my loved ones around me lifting my spirit high.

    What do you want to be when you Grow Up: Pharmacist or Sonographer...maybe even have my own kind of small store for random things when I retire from that...

    What country would you most like to Visit: So many to visit...Ireland, Scotland, Transylvania, Japan...

    In a Boy

    Favourite Eye Color: Anything that can keep my gaze and return the love I feel.

    Favourite Hair Color: Black...but I can deal.

    Short or Long Hair: Short is fine, but to me Long hair is H.O.T.

    Height: Taller than I am, but not huge...

    Weight: Not fat, but not anorexic either.

    Best Clothing Style: His own

    Number of Drugs I have taken: Only Prescription Medication and things needed for surgery or headaches like Tylenol...

    Number of CDs I own: I think I lost count after 20...something

    Number of Piercings: One time in both ears.

    Number of Tattoos: Currently none, but plan to get a few small ones...A cresent moon with a single nautical star top match my mother's (She has three stars, one for each kid) A pair of bat wings to show I want to fly away and be free. Then Possibly the Goddess's symbol of three moons, Two Cresent and a full moon.

    Number of things in my Past I Regret: Some really stupid trust choices and all the mistakes I ever made. If I could redo things I would.

    How do you feel currently after taking this Survey: A little happy as I can share with people who I truly am...but a little depressed as to who would scorn me for my beliefs or thoughts...

    Thank you so much for reading the Survey, I hope it opened your eyes a little. Any questions, feel free to PM me.



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    I can appreciate that . It often helps to jot down our thoughts , dark or joyful , it gives us a chance to contemplate there possible solution . On the other hand your poetic form is suffering , and your structure is losing some of its cohesion . Then again inductive collusion is not always the key with free form stream of consciousness . In any case I could like to elevate your mood , so (if you could get into some dictionary practice) I suggest "Soliloquy" again . Its the somewhat comical way I chose to deal with my violent side . Maybe you could find some inspiration there .

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    | Posted on 2010-03-23 12:47:22 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I left you a comment and would like to suggest two of my pieces "Soliloquy" and "The Quest" perhaps they'll help improve your mood . Keep writing .
    | Posted on 2010-03-23 01:45:09 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I admit I may have laid it on a little thick but I like to have fun with words just for vocabulary's sake . I look forward to your new story , and perhaps some of your new poems you mentioned in your journal , I really like your style , and it really is the lividly lurid allure in your allusions that gets it for me . Your analogies and metaphoricals really do seem a little bit beyond your years . You have obviously been thinking about these things for some time as expressed by the alacrity with which you use them . I guess actually what I really hoped to accomplish was to make you want to rise to greater heights . My writing has been a real joy to me through the years . I suspect yours will cause you similar states of ecstasy .
    | Posted on 2010-03-04 02:05:26 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'm glad you liked "Echo" its really one of my better works which is somewhat surprising since it really is my first poem
    | Posted on 2010-03-04 01:33:12 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comments and favs!
    | Posted on 2010-03-02 16:11:27 | by xxLive4lovexx - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I thought it might give you a different view perhaps of the blackness we all share . After all to say that the metaphysical mystique of the human race is an imaginary condition is a gross denial of evolutional principle . Which brings to mind the question . What then is the nature of problematic prosthesis , The vision of sartorial perfection , or the visage of spectral grace . If you would like to read more of my poems I suggest Soliloquy or Dream or even Jacks to open
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