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     Break away
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    :: : Class : Lyrics :
     Never Give up
    :|| V: 422 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Lyrics :
     Teamage Dream
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    ::Being a Teen : Class : Lyrics :
     Fallin' Down
    :|| V: 433 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Lyrics :
     Forest of Fuzen (chapter two)
    :|| V: 518 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Story :
     Forest of Fuzen (chapter one)
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    ::Misc : Class : Story :
     The common womans prayer
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
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    I enjoyed your song break away, I knew you wouldn't need my help with your song writing. All you have to do now is pair it up with music
    Hope you've been well
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    | Posted on 2011-05-31 15:49:34 | by chiatealover - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i liked break away but u havent set ur chorus or verses so it sort of makes it like a poem instead of a song maybe shorten the verses a little but thats easy fixed :)
    | Posted on 2011-05-11 00:18:37 | by brokenbylove - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    lol u didnt bug me
    | Posted on 2011-05-10 06:48:46 | by brokenbylove - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i tried to leave a comment, but there was no comment box. i don't know what wrong. i refreshed the page couple of times and nothing. sorry...


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    | Posted on 2011-05-05 23:34:53 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    If you go back after posting in edit mode and delete both the suffix and the apostrophe plus of course the funny squiggles then type back in the apostrophe and suffix it will take care of the strange typo things .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-05-05 12:15:44 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Gosh girl , you don't seem to need much help by me . I say just stick to your guns with that indomitable teenage spirit . I read all four of your songs , and although true they aren't all finished , I think your doing just fine . It takes practice to come up with that catchy hook and rhymes that lend themselves to melody but you definitely seem to be working on it . Keep it up , it will only get better . I speak from experience .
    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-05-04 21:15:43 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -



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