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    Journal: Ahhh :D
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Thank you, who ever is listening. My life is finally slowing down in the change department a little. I finally have some time to try and wrap my head around everything that's happened, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see what life has in store for me next, I wouldn't be surprised if it was another huge change. :D I always seem to get those at the most inopportune of times, but hey, that just adds to the fun. Now, if you don't mind, I think I'll go to bed.

    Take Care,
    -Natalia


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    Thank you for commenting on Cyrano. I'm glad you liked it. And didn't give me the 'You should tell him" advice bit.
    He's my best friend so the position it truly like that of Cyrano. Funny thing is we are doing that play together and he has the lead. So the words came easily enough
    Pursuitoflife
    | Posted on 2007-02-10 13:34:23 | by Pursuitoflife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey. Thanks on the comment. Im glad you like it. I think I kind of fixed the sentence you didnt get, maybe itll fit in better now...I dunno, I tried. :)
    Thanks a bunch.
    Meg
    | Posted on 2007-02-09 15:44:48 | by dreamer37517 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey,

    Thanks for the time to stop by, Yea I see that I did type it up in a hurry, haha. But id just like to speak a point of view on the part you suggest was inaccurate. The part where it says "Fall Under." Ive argued this point many times with english teachers back when I was in school. Writing cant be contained to accurate grammer all of the time as to keep metaphorical value. If we never ventured to step outside of the box and describe ourselves in a much more descriptive way. Take this scenerio, (real one I almost failed an english paper for this) "Im standing on the edge of oblivion, facing towards sanity" there are several problems with this. For one, you cant stand on the edge of oblivion since oblivion means nothingness, And secondly you cant face towards sanity, since sanity isnt a real object that is made of physical form, so you cant see it. So to continue my point, you can see here that without the usage of this type of material poetry, and even writings like novels could be very boring. See my point yet? oh well if not, im done babbling. Oh and btw...you can to fall under. You can fall under many objects. trees, cars, water, anything really. so long as the falling comes first. haha. respond if need be, Id like to hear your point.

    p.s. so sorry you had to read through all my grammatical errors, I've dealt with a writers block for months now and Im not at the top of my game :[
    | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by siroez - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Aw, thanks a lot. That piece was really special to me. I didn't work on it as much as I have most of my other pieces, but it was straight from the heart and I'm glad that people can read it and feel a little of what I felt.
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by Zabriel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    macabre is what was meat to come out. Not the completely buchered spelling I presented earlier.
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by etherealpoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    "Oddity among Perfection": Yes the suspense was resolved just right - that's why I got a buzz out of it; and if you can remember exactly how you did that, it must be a good trick! You asked about the title (I said it was possibly ungrammatical): oho no yer don't, that is your puzzle and anyway I might be wrong and anyway your Poetic Licence covers it.
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -



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