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Journal: Dog -------------------------------------------Mood: Dog!    The influx has stopped. I'm going to start chillaxin' on some real shit. Every song on my next album has its lyrics posted, I have no more shit just lyin' around to post. But I will promise this, the next poem I post will be epic. For now, enjoy what I have, I'ma hit random at this bitch so as to spread the love. Until then dogs, it's been real. ...Created 2009-08-16 01:22:31     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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...just gave my own personal opinions which were honest. Sheesh. And you are free to take or trash them. Eh back, eh?

| Posted on 2009-09-09 08:20:11 | by O - [ Reply to This ] -

wow... so i was running out of things to do online, and instead of closing ye olde laptop and moving on like a normal person, i decided to check my old es accounts' pages (i used to be sadtrapofgravit, for the record). and i wanted to say thanks. i'm glad someone cares about comments :P but i'm still around. just reborn. rachel

| Posted on 2009-08-30 15:41:50 | by etheror - [ Reply to This ] -

Helloo friend !

| Posted on 2009-08-21 13:18:03 | by Sodais - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for your comment on "A Collection of Thoughts: I. Religion". I'm really quite flattered... it's not often I get told that I have written the best poem that one person has read on the site, actually, though it does brighten up the day. I suppose real life does make good poetry, hm? Oh my God(ess). I followed the link in your journal and... wow. Thank you, I'm really glad that I wrote a poem touched someone that deeply. Slainte, DW

| Posted on 2009-08-05 08:26:11 | by Shadowstar13 - [ Reply to This ] -

Good ol' limericks, indeed!

| Posted on 2009-08-03 12:57:29 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -

Cheers 4 getting back to me, re my "Relapse" comments. I do think you need to take a serious look at it, because I really don't think it was a great piece, no matter how I view it. I would say the 1st two stanzas aren't that bad, but after that it does go very wrong. The only advice I could give you would be to read a few books on poetry. I did this recently and it really opened my eyes and made me realise where I was going wrong. I will take a look at some of your other submissions, but I have a feeling I'll encounter the same problems. I apologise if that sounds rude, bit I believe in giving honest feedback. Cheers, Alexboy.

| Posted on 2009-06-16 05:50:26 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -

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