hey thanks for your comment on a night on the town... and your right.. its not quite finished yet .. but i wanted to put it up and get some feedback on it
Hi. Thank you for commenting on my "poem" BTW, You will find a lot of my "poetry" reads sort of like prose.
To explain, it seems like a LOT of people really don't enjoy reading poetry.
(Myself included, you might be surprised to know).
What I am after is accessibility. I want people to enjoy reading my work, not it being a drag.
Still, I find poetry captivating and something that comes naturally and can be quite powerful..
So, I attempt to combine the two.
Thanks.
David
Thanks for the comment on Insomnia (until I'm 18) was a bunch of jurnl entrys that were thrown together...
It was suposed to make you think "What the f---"
Absolutely no purpose, my friend. I just wanted to write that scene for some reason (the first part, where she's smoking a cigarette and he pours drinks). It just kind of went from there.
Yeah, Memories Faded is our only real song and the lyrics came after the music so it's not as good as it could be. And as for Without You and A Summer's Night In Vain, we needed two "single" type songs, so I made stuff a little bit more mainstream and catchy, and lots of people can relate to... but tried to keep my originality when it comes to the lyrics.
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