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NoahName: Greg Prichard ASL: 40/M/Iraq Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4868 Life Story: Who me? [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 6212 D 17.02 Years 1.7 Quote: We do not determine foreign policy, we are the tools of that policy |
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Happy Thankingsgiving I hope get home soon
be well and be safe |
| Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by littlepoet - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Hey Greg, for some reason, the site is not giving me the option of leaving comments. Few little things first...I think you want "Are your shores" or "is your shore." Also, and I'm not completely sure on this one...I think you want run through rather than ran through... And finally, near the end, I think you want wander elsewhere rather than wonder elsewhere... Check it and see.
Now to the content, the indictment and vision are revalations and certainly not lost on me. I would call this one truly a work of inspiration. Nice blending of the classic and contemporary. K~ |
| Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by Keats - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Hi Greg, thanks for your comments on Brown Skinned Girl. I'm glad you liked it. I'm sorry it has taken so long to reply back to you. I've just been really busy with a huge move out of town. I hope you make it home safely and that the time flies by for you.
Catrina |
| Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele - [ Reply to This ] - |