--Elite Writer Alias: Non-Sens-Uality Name: Ly. L. Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 3805 Life Story: Perfection in Chaos [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 5 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5335 D 14.62 Years 1.46 Decades 177.83 Months 762.14 Weeks 5.335000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: In the game of seduction, there is only one rule : NEVER fall in love...
Changes Of Universes, of Philosophies, Worldviews and Ideas Inside The Being of 'I'... let the Illusion of 'Non-Sens-Uality' become a mere sparkle of the Past. My artist-spirit has found a new fountain of Inspiration, new muses - and a Chaos filled with more feeling and sense... of course 'surrealistic' it remains.
This Profile is just a 'virtual memory' in Time's Diary (But I will let it 'alive' with the poems - it is none the less a part of 'ME') ... and a new Chapter opens in my artistic Universe:
-Lith-Ium-
Yo, i'm not sure if I replied to that message of yours in refrence to my comment on your peice entitled 'do not read', or something like that.
i read it again, and i'm sorry i must have been drunk lurking elite again. the peice is fine, very nice. what i meant by visually appealing is to just compact it a bit more, I saw no reason in it being so space.
Keep my attention, constantly so I can't look away.
Very nice though, thanks AGAIN for sharing. hehehehehe. this is sooo delayed.
Well, to me it seemed like the voice wasn't very present, and I attributed that to trying to write a certain way. I'm very much a naturalist in that I don't like polished poems, I like raw words.
Thanks for the comments on a Vampire's Confessions. Im glad you got the general idea of the poem. I myself am a sanguinius/psi vampire and it was just somthing that crossed my mind one day so I had to write about it.