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    --Elite Writer
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    Name: Ly. L.
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    Journal: DeadEnd
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    Mood: Nostalgic
      
    Changes Of Universes, of Philosophies, Worldviews and Ideas Inside The Being of 'I'... let the Illusion of 'Non-Sens-Uality' become a mere sparkle of the Past. My artist-spirit has found a new fountain of Inspiration, new muses - and a Chaos filled with more feeling and sense... of course 'surrealistic' it remains. This Profile is just a 'virtual memory' in Time's Diary (But I will let it 'alive' with the poems - it is none the less a part of 'ME') ... and a new Chapter opens in my artistic Universe: -Lith-Ium-


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    Featured: Temptation of the odd

     "eXperiencE eXtremE"
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Duality
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     PaRaDiGmAtIc
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    ::Gothic : Class : Poetry :
     Del-P(h)i
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    ::Dark : Class : Poetry :
     Times Theatre
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     What is eternity
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Unconsidered Things
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     Ideas Idle Id
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     The Pact
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    ::Gothic : Class : Poetry :
     Caressing Ice
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     Innocence
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     The Demon and The Muse
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     Moments
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     Do not read
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     Realms of Infinite Distorsions
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Eternity is...
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Featured workTemptation of the odd
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     W...
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    ::Broken : Class : Poetry :
     Dialog with the Devil
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     Pathetique
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    Yo, i'm not sure if I replied to that message of yours in refrence to my comment on your peice entitled 'do not read', or something like that.

    i read it again, and i'm sorry i must have been drunk lurking elite again. the peice is fine, very nice. what i meant by visually appealing is to just compact it a bit more, I saw no reason in it being so space.

    Keep my attention, constantly so I can't look away.

    Very nice though, thanks AGAIN for sharing. hehehehehe. this is sooo delayed.
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 14:22:04 | by Cannablisjunkie - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks alot, I appreciate it :)
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 09:45:49 | by goveiac - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, to me it seemed like the voice wasn't very present, and I attributed that to trying to write a certain way. I'm very much a naturalist in that I don't like polished poems, I like raw words.
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 16:53:50 | by andthebandgoes - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Trying to sound like anything else, don't get defensive.

    It just sounded like you were trying a little too hard to be something else.

    Your poem sounded forced.

    And don't post poems if you don't want critiques.
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 16:36:44 | by andthebandgoes - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on "chaos" is that a quote from a final fantasy?
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 09:24:35 | by MaxHam - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comments on a Vampire's Confessions. Im glad you got the general idea of the poem. I myself am a sanguinius/psi vampire and it was just somthing that crossed my mind one day so I had to write about it.
    | Posted on 2007-03-02 19:25:26 | by The_Forsaken1 - [ Reply to This ] -



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