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I really like the language in your poems. Don't ask me what they're about, I just had a flick through and am pretty thoughtless today. But I do admire their tightness. When I write I have so many thes and ands and buts, my punctuation and grammer are school stuff. The poems themselves are good but I've slobbered all over them, it is my way at the moment. But your poems are eloquent, I admire that.
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| Posted on 2012-07-10 07:21:06 | by Wolfwatching - [ Reply to This ] - |
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You are so kind. I thoroughly appreciate your thoughtful comment on No Shadow in April, and the time you took to give length to what you had to say. This was a real-life situation for me. My daughter, now 21, had some severe teen problems with rage and some challenges mentally. This was one of the most heart-wrenching decisions I ever had to make. The mental health system in the USA is so clogged I cannot even begin to tell you what we went through to even get her this far. This was just such an emotional event in my life, that if I hadn't written it down, and editted it...and re-editted...it would have driven me into the ground. Thanks again for your insightful and perceptual comment. ~Kimmy~
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| Posted on 2009-01-05 19:09:42 | by KimmyMim - [ Reply to This ] - |
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oh and to answer your question. rustleless is a word i made up so i guess its not a real word. but it fits. and the squeaking of diseased rats was talking about the sound of rats that may be diseased with rabies or other diseases that rats have.
-tricklingrain |
| Posted on 2008-11-14 22:24:56 | by tricklingrain - [ Reply to This ] - |
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hey thanx for your very intriguing comment to my poem 'dead'. i like your thinking.
thanks again!:D -tricklingrain |
| Posted on 2008-11-14 22:22:17 | by tricklingrain - [ Reply to This ] - |