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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Oli
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    Journal: Choke!
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    Mood: Frustrated
      
    Today I realized how much sucks in the world. If he was here I would rip out his testicles, shove them in his mouth, tape it shut, and wait for him to choke.


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     Take. Keep. Please.
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     Just a minute longer...
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     Stuck
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     Lies under the carpet
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     Double Time
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     The Stream Beneath Me
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     Between the lines
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     confident beauty
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    ||| Messages |||
      
    D; So sorry!

    Um, well, what I had written was something along the lines of:

    Thank you so much for your comment, I am so very glad you enjoyed it! It was a lovely surprise after a not so good day at school [that day wasn't a great day :/ so].

    (:

    Thanks heaps, I really appreciate it!

    Take care,

    -Esha
    | Posted on 2011-02-10 01:02:50 | by EshyFishy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi! Thanks for the comment on "Grammatically Speaking". The format is pretty much how it should be except the double spacing. I'm glad you noticed that it could be read as one or two, as that is what I'm going for & I'm glad you liked it!
    | Posted on 2011-02-09 23:44:05 | by Santi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    So sorry, I accidentally commented on your piece! To make up for it, I shall comment on it for real!!
    | Posted on 2011-02-07 03:05:21 | by EshyFishy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'm glad you enjoy my writing!
    | Posted on 2008-09-14 00:25:23 | by little_theif - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Oli,

    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments on my poem "To Our teachers"...I'm glad u liked reading it.....yes it is a heartfelt one..tho written pretty much at the last moment to be put up on our class board next day. I agree...school days are real great.

    vl check out sum of ur stuff sum time soon
    Have a good day: )
    | Posted on 2008-09-09 16:20:55 | by mdsouza - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hi oli! ty for your comment on Eternal Dream Blues, now its actually about how he killed himself after raping my sister for 3 years, now you were right about the part of him ignoring me he actually gave my sister more attention, now I thought this was because he favorited her, but it was actually cuz he was a child molester. but that was over 11 years ago, so its no big deal anymore, I just vent through poetry, but ty again on your comment.


    -eggshells-
    | Posted on 2008-09-06 00:01:46 | by eggshells - [ Reply to This ] -



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