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"That which was already far far away is now nigh unattainable." I think about these words every day since I read them. Thank you for your comment. Hope to see you back again sometime. Otherwise, I hope all is well! :) -Esha

| Posted on 2016-12-30 22:11:30 | by EshyFishy - [ Reply to This ] -

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| Posted on 2016-10-21 00:47:29 | by BlankSheet - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi! Thanks for commenting on 'Unsaid.' I totally appreciated your constructive honesty and feelings on the piece. This poem was a fusion of two different pieces, but the body of the idea came to me when I was cooking dinner, quite suddenly, and quite forcefully. While some people might add to their work and build on it after penning the initial notes, I find most of what I do is slashing, and it can be brutal. This is also where I can run into a challenge of sorts. I was pretty happy with the feel of this one, as well as the sentiment, if not the phrasing. When I attempted to change some of it to be less tired and more striking, it came off something like trying too hard, so I opted to leave it alone and hope the message and the music would be enough to make up for it. Thanks for saying what you did though, because it gives me an idea of what to shoot for. :) Erin

| Posted on 2016-10-21 00:28:35 | by BlankSheet - [ Reply to This ] -

The quote was taken from your post. My response was a surrealistic impression of your thought processes. Technical writing is very streamlined and precise and poetry is often not.

| Posted on 2016-09-25 07:33:33 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -

No prob, enjoyed reading. To your journal question, have you tried it with a Firefox browser? Worked for me when I updated mine.

| Posted on 2016-09-20 10:19:46 | by Pietro - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for your thoughts.

| Posted on 2016-08-24 17:50:48 | by etheror - [ Reply to This ] -

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