--Elite Writer Alias: OrangeWithWhite Name: Jeremy Howard ASL: 22/m/Buf NY Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 48 Life Story: Former Cutter [ Ignore User ]
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Hi there, thanks for your comment on my poem 'musicality'. Really glad you like it, and can understand my meaning behind it. I wrote it whilst listening to music actully, as I had no inspiration, then all these words started filling my head, and hey presto 'musicality' was born!! Thanks again. I'll try get to reading some of your work as soon as I can. x poetic harmony x
Hey there, appreciated what you thought of it. Yea, as you said, it wasn't meant to be preachy; it was just my situation that weekend. And no, I'm not religious (lapsed Catholic since I was 8yo... which doesn't really count lol), but the Virgin Mary symbolizes all that is pure and untouchable to me, over desire and temptation which the other two 'faces' represented to me, which also brung up the whole Holy Trinity and all that.
Anyway, I'm blabbing lol. Thanks again for your time
In response to your comments I should note I may endup working for a big firm, but this was a more personal matter, a friend commiting a small crime, and what I should do about it.
Yes, it is true I seemed very logical in that piece. However, the downside to logic is that it is often a cold partner. . . We each have our pains to write of, you of the lover you miss so painfully, I of the lover I have never had, may never have, or narrowly missed.
I have more emotional pieces, such as A Past Retouched, Home, or You and I if you want something with more warmth. I am not as heartless as I may seem in this piece. Looking forward to seeing what you have to say. -David
Glad you liked my write, man. And I am grateful you placed your personal feelings in it. That's what the purpose of the book is. Lets me know I'm doing this thing right. And I also plan to post more clips from my book here.
I'll go look at one of yours now - to return the favor.
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