--Elite Writer Alias: Orcelandrya Name: Krysta-Marie OracleOfTheNight ASL: 18/f/ont Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 401 Life Story: I Have No Life [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 1 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 668 D 1.83 Years 0.18 Decades 22.27 Months 95.43 Weeks 6.68000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: insanity's blessing, the worlds curse
everything in my life has been changing
warping itself a new path around me
i'm not sure how to deal with it
not sure if i can deal with it
soon i'll be trying to get back on my old medications in hopes it will help
i may even be going onto some new ones
theres alot going on in my life that even my closest friends have yet to hear about but eventually i will tell the world
once i've made peace with all to myself
"i guess its love" doesnt sound forced to me,I thought it flowed well actually.Good piece,I feel insanely jealous though,being single and not being able to remember the last time i got that feeling.No more moaning about that though(promise).So yeah,as a love poem it was very well-written,it didnt sound too soppy either:-)
Thank you for the comment on 'my love'. Yes I know that poem could have been better. To tell you the truth i am not a big fan of it either. I'll make sure to use your critism in the future poems I write. I am begginer at poems so I can use it :)
thank you so very much for the very nice comment on Love-Forever. I'm glad you liked it so well! It means a lot to me, that poem. :-D So it made me warm and happy that you liked it too and wouldnt change anything.