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    Journal: The Mask
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    Mood: INFPism
      
    by WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

    "PUT off that mask of burning gold
    With emerald eyes."
    "O no, my dear, you make so bold
    To find if hearts be wild and wise,
    And yet not cold."

    "I would but find what's there to find,
    Love or deceit."
    "It was the mask engaged your mind,
    And after set your heart to beat,
    Not what's behind."

    "But lest you are my enemy,
    I must enquire."
    "O no, my dear, let all that be;
    What matter, so there is but fire
    In you, in me?"


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    Thanks for the time you put into your comment.
    What the poems gives and what it intends might be two different things.

    It's meant to be about a person who was so focused on what had been going wrong that when something (or more particularly, someone) went right for them they were about to rediscover love, life, the affirmative.

    Also it's about me coming home too, because NZ fills me up with something that was lost. But yes, it's really about the wonder you can feel for a person.

    Thanks for the time and the fave. You are very generous for a 15yrold. :)
    | Posted on 2010-03-13 06:42:05 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Oh, but hey wait. Was that an assumption as to what I wrote all being the same style? Now you really hurt my non existent feelings. (by still not trying to read anything else, just pick something ... > >)

    But I understand this wasn't quite your type of piece. Like I said, there are a lot of different things I tried. But it makes me wonder. If it didn't appeal to you, didn't elicit anything ... why comment?
    Honestly, I only ever comment when I at the very least feel something, or can put a finger on something which is wrong, or can be improved without pulling apart the idea behind the poem.

    This isn't helping.
    And please don't wish me luck. It doesn't exist. Don't worry about me being offended, we're not all that angry and troubled~ As I know many here on ES take everything rather personally. I don't really. So stop apologizing, I'm as offended by your apologies as I am by your comments and you know what?
    I still like my keyboard and screen and am not hyperventilating behind either. :)
    | Posted on 2010-02-21 04:51:24 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'm not offended, so you're not sorry.
    Solves that~ Anyway, I understand what you're saying, I'm just pointing out that the comments in itself have something to say about the audience we're having, doesn't it?

    Besides, I don't think poetry, or my writing for that matter (since I am reluctant to call it poetry, since I don't know what it is) has to serve the public. :)
    | Posted on 2010-02-21 04:08:14 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    First of all, thank you for your comment on "live forever, second. You never even glanced at any of my other work; which is why there was such a long tale of me having to use more description, which you will find there.
    Second, I'm not a poet, it may not even be poetry. I was describing nothing, hence, yes, there are no emotions there. A feat all on it's own, yet it manages to get 16 views in one day -makes you think, since none of the works I posted, which were filled with more emotion, and more description, never got this amount in one day.
    Not fit for the readers then? I wonder, perhaps people only like looking at faulty and common things.

    What I'm trying to say is; yes, you were right, yes I noticed the patterns, and yes, it's a blunt nothing out there. Still people seem to like it more then any of my other works. Makes you think, hmm?

    Well anyway, thanks again. *waves and poofs*
    | Posted on 2010-02-21 03:13:48 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks Pantheory,

    interesting handle btw.

    You devoted a lot of time and thought to your critique, just wanted to say to you that I very much appreciate it. And, I do.

    Cheers,
    daniel
    | Posted on 2010-02-20 21:02:06 | by theAlysonDiarys - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello ... thank you for taking the time and trouble to write such a long comment on Alien in A Cat Skin... wow... I think it is probably the longest I have ever received and much appreciated.

    I used to post comments, but now only read the work I find here on this site as I find it harder and harder to critique other peoples work and writing a brief comment such as great or loved this or well done... just doesn't seem to carry it .. so having stuck myself on a fence I resolved to stay there... for now anyway....

    I thank you again :)
    | Posted on 2010-02-19 09:34:23 | by col13x - [ Reply to This ] -



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