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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I used to wake up drowning in your long dark hair
    Bleeding from my eyelids, you kept a dagger there


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    I encourage you to post. There is still some life here. Thank you for investing your time to read and comment. A blessing for me to hear your views.
    | Posted on 2017-04-17 22:15:01 | by lori_tab - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting. Would the ending have been better had it said ending with warm fuzzies in your belly button hole? :) no? Fine. Agreed. Really in all honesty, the entire poem sucked. I'm not proud of that one, but I do like the video. Had a brain fart when it came to writing something with substance. I should have just quoted lyrics from the songs. Loved your visual of people actually putting on their dancing feet! Exactly what I was going for. I can be quird in my language and that is a perfect example. Glad you had a fun visual. It's nice to escape mentally for a moment, I think. Now go put your damn dancin' feet on!
    | Posted on 2017-04-13 01:59:02 | by Chelebel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for reading, and your comment on Once. I'll take look at it again. I appreciate you thoughts.
    | Posted on 2016-11-08 16:58:00 | by closetpoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Indeed! More than dirty, quite ingrained and crusted-out exterior tiles :-(
    | Posted on 2016-11-06 18:32:11 | by CrypticBard - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Can't wait to see the new work!
    ~Carrie.
    | Posted on 2016-11-06 17:55:38 | by Carosuel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    A guerney is a water "cannon"
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