--Elite Writer Alias: Paradox Name: Adrian Atom ASL: 35/m/Earthbound Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 182 Life Story: boring [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks for commenting. Would the ending have been better had it said ending with warm fuzzies in your belly button hole? :) no? Fine. Agreed. Really in all honesty, the entire poem sucked. I'm not proud of that one, but I do like the video. Had a brain fart when it came to writing something with substance. I should have just quoted lyrics from the songs. Loved your visual of people actually putting on their dancing feet! Exactly what I was going for. I can be quird in my language and that is a perfect example. Glad you had a fun visual. It's nice to escape mentally for a moment, I think. Now go put your damn dancin' feet on!