--Elite Writer Alias: Paradox Name: Adrian Atom ASL: 33/m/Earthbound Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 43 Life Story: boring [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 4 Forum Posts: 3 Shoutbox Posts: 10 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4899 D 13.42 Years 1.34 Decades 163.3 Months 699.86 Weeks 4.899000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Like a long-legged fly upon the stream His mind moves upon silence
It's hard to remove the screens from people's eyes, I agree! You sadly are correct. I feel like if somebody really cares and their heart is in the right spot, the those screens can wait cause you might miss out on a beautiful memory.
In reference to your comment on "you," I disagree. I'm not searching for anything. Though, why does this seem to be far fetched? It's not like a picnic is a difficult thing to pull off or a momumental arrangement. It's like you said, a simple thing. But really, there is nothing complicated about a picnic or staring at the clouds. That I believe is simple through and through. More people should want to lay on the ground and admire the sky as it passes us by.
Thanks for the comment. I dont want to be known as dark and gloomy! I mean it is hard to deny all of the adolescent angst that made my debut, but if you were to really observe most of my writing has been faith based as i have gotten older. Cavern being an exception. I was so sick for so long it made me feel better getting some of those poisonous thoughts out of me.
I cant wait to catch up. I hope your return will be repeated.
Thank you for taking your time to leave a few comments on my work. I appreciate it. I agree with you about deserving of a good title. The suggestion is good as well for the title, but I'm still not satisfied with it, lol. I will see if I can continue to do better with that ending, to disappoint at the end, is well, a tragedy.