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Thank you for your comment
It was just a short, straigt foreward poem.
But I agree with you, if I can find somthing that will make it better and not ruin its straight forewardness I will add it, because it is a bit short. But as ive been told a million times, being short isnt always bad. ;P
no problem. i comment because i care. writing is my life. writing tells my life. so i guess its the same for all the other writers in the world. sometimes its ust easier to put it on paper.