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Name: Alyssa Thingermabobing
ASL: 15/f/NYC
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Life Story: I am a person.
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it won't allow me to have long journal titles like i need and that bothers me.

my mother is in the music room having a voice lesson with anna who is at least 18 years younger than her. i'm sitting in my room on my windowseat just listening to pandora and writing a journal entry because i have nothing else to do. hopefully someone will actually leave me some comments and i'll get some feedback in this long grueling hour on the laptop before i go to the normal computer.

i had rehearsal today. danny & dan weren't there and god did that make me so happy. i wasn't plagued by taunts or caressed by long tendrils of greasy hair that listens to crappy screamo music that he refuses to admit to be screamo.

i'm starting to being in this play. i didn't get a lead like i normally do, and shakespeare is just not my thing. danny thinks he's the best thing that ever happened to theatre when he's just a good singer and actor. i can't wait until he gets into college and he meets people who are more talented & luckier than he is. oh that'll be the day.

there is so much more i want to say, but i think i'll save it for another time.


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Um your [censored] wrong, she didn't appreciate it I've talked to her and she has a pretty fond hate for you just like a couple more people on this site. Your poetry isn't out of the norm, it's not even [censored] poetry. And BTW you can not judge someone off of their writings until you read more than just one poem, and get rid of your [censored] bias that you have for them, even if you do dislike them. But as hot headed as you are I don't think that's possible.
| Posted on 2007-10-20 04:24:58 | by Crestfallenman - [ Reply to This ] -
  
IT SURPRISES ME.
| Posted on 2007-10-19 18:06:21 | by Kira Why Not - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Dood. Lol at your comments.
| Posted on 2007-10-17 18:14:31 | by Kira Why Not - [ Reply to This ] -
  
how the [censored] are you going to get on this site and [censored] tell people how to write their poetry you're a disgrace to this [censored] site. So i don't use Microsoft word to fix my spelling, but who does? right? Your probably one of those lone rejects from high school that has no life just puts their head in books and are the most infra human species know to this planet. Basically I'm not here to talk [censored] about you I'm here so you will shut the [censored] up and quit criticizing other people on how they write or what they write about. This isn't elizabethan times we don't have to use proper grammar that [censored] gets boring and repetitive. how about saying good things to people and maybe you would get some respect back you [censored] retard.

P.S. you can fix my spelling and grammar for me cause your amazing at it.


love,
Steve
| Posted on 2007-10-17 13:39:19 | by withdrawn heart - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for your comment on "The Day of Forty-Four Sunsets".

I think it looks fine without punctuation. I really only use punctuation in my poems if I really deem it necessary. Besides, I don't like little "."s and ","s dotted all over the place. I guess I'm picky like that.
| Posted on 2007-10-17 08:22:23 | by manwithnoname - [ Reply to This ] -
  
I've read some of your other such constructive criticism what you left Demon_666. And now I know what you are. Your a stuck up [censored]. I've been their before all suicidal and [censored]. BS, because if you really have you wouldn't have said such hurtful things to a weaker person, because it's people like you that cause people to become suicidal in the first thing.

"I can honestly say that I am a better writer than you." That's the words I would expect from a stuck up 15 year old preppy looking slut like yourself. You're probably one of those idiots that I found in high school that wear their stupid PAC Sun, Ambercromby, and is so far up themselves and have mommy and daddy pay your way through everything in life. At least most of those idiots that I know are destined with a child at a young age, turn into the largest walking STD in the planet, and become this no good wife that their husband cheats on at any chance they get. (excuse me for the misspelling I know that really pisses you off, but oh well.)

And I know maybe I should watch what I write on here on ES, because anger sure makes people look immature, but I can't stand it when people like you attack other writers. The girl is down. She's depressed and through a lot of her writings I can see the logic behind why she feels like [censored], and comments like yours aren't needed.

Do a favor learn how to write more enjoyable poetry, stop being so stuck up, then learn how to accept others and their writing instead of attacking all of us here on ES. Because your a degradation to this whole [censored] site.
| Posted on 2007-10-17 04:49:59 | by Crestfallenman - [ Reply to This ] -



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