Thank you for the comment and you're right about the stanza. I've been having trouble with that one, but haven't focused enough on it to fix it. Thanks for the ideas, think I'll use your second one, it fits well. And Patricio the Great was a wonderful poem, I truely enjoyed it. Enjoy.
You're back. Excellent! (no I'm not on drugs, I'm happy for legal reasons). The name of the author of contest entries doesn't come up, even after the winner is announced. I put in a comment later on in case anyone wanted to know. I thought I'd tell you here, since you said you were interested. I believe "only courteous" was how I phrased it. Ha ha, I amaze myself sometimes. "courteous"! Hilarious.