--Elite Writer Alias: Persephone Name: Karen Kriz ASL: 19/f/ US Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 2728 Life Story: alive [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 8 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4761 D 13.04 Years 1.3 Decades 158.7 Months 680.14 Weeks 4.761000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: I do not believe that people fail. I believe that we can be less then perfect, but no person can fail. - Me
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it, but, at the same time, I don't think you actually understood what the message of the writing was. I stated in the description that the writing itself is nothing; that it was never meant to be anything good, but I'll submit it anyway because the message is, in fact, somewhat valuable. With a little more time, you'll see that the writing isn't actually about the world coming to an end at all. In fact, it's quite the opposite. I understand where you're coming from, though, and I've never taken offense from criticism, and, if you really, seriously want to critique this piece of writing, then I'd ask you to read it again and give it quite a while to sink in before forming any opinion.