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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: PhantomRose
    Name: Jaymee Vronch
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    Journal: Poop
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    Mood: In Love
      
    Feelin the love :)


    ...Created 2011-05-11 00:11:58     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Living Nightmare
    :|| V: 419 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Dark : Class : Poetry :
     Two Headed Butterfly
    :|| V: 389 | C: 2 ||:
    ::The pain inside : Class : Poetry :
     Whos Leg is this??
    :|| V: 429 | C: 3 ||:
    ::What is : Class : Poetry :
     Unhappy Mother's Day
    :|| V: 377 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Angry : Class : Poetry :
     Weeping Eyes of a Girl Unwanted
    :|| V: 395 | C: 1 ||:
    ::What you did : Class : Poetry :
     Puppet Life
    :|| V: 497 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Dark : Class : Poetry :
     My Other Me
    :|| V: 455 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Mirror or Mask : Class : Poetry :
     The Battle Between Good and Evil
    :|| V: 932 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     I'm Leaving
    :|| V: 440 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Angst : Class : Poetry :
     What Kind of Family?
    :|| V: 425 | C: 1 ||:
    ::I am dead inside : Class : Poetry :
     I'll Bet You Didn't Know
    :|| V: 508 | C: 2 ||:
    ::The pain inside : Class : Poetry :
     Troubled Romance
    :|| V: 405 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Perfect Love
    :|| V: 484 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     My Ode to You
    :|| V: 466 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     A Reason to Finish
    :|| V: 482 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Hopelessly Hoping
    :|| V: 502 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     I've Tryed and Tryed
    :|| V: 486 | C: 0 ||:
    ::I hate you : Class : Poetry :
     Judgement Night
    :|| V: 468 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Flying With My Love
    :|| V: 531 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     If Looks Could Kill
    :|| V: 501 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
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    ||| Messages |||
      
    That poem you have there is powerful.No reader can be indifferent with that piece because that's the natural anger that's in a child from a parent that neglects there child, doesn't believe in their child or puts them down.
    It really sucks, but anyway I know you catch my drift.
    The first step to writing powerful material is to write how you feel, no matter the way you feel.Then one can follow up with the rest of the creative [censored] further along the way. How bout that for raw ES.

    That piece caught my attention like someone clinching a hold of my tie or something.
    Funny how life is grand but reality bites.
    I'll check you out again..

    Peace Jaymee

    Rexsan
    | Posted on 2011-04-12 16:57:55 | by Rex Gold - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for the comments, Phantom. you are very kind...

    jacob.
    | Posted on 2011-03-28 15:16:45 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    its not about you, dont flatter yourself.
    so no Hmmmm interesting.


    The reason i shushed you was because Ludtke was talking and I didn't want to get in trouble.

    grats on the job.
    | Posted on 2010-06-06 02:52:07 | by MinervaBlu - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Your welcome
    and I don't know how
    I couldn't like it
    I mean I just really liked the whole idea of it and how you wrote it
    :p
    ahahahhaa
    ur really creative.
    keep up the good job
    ^_^
    | Posted on 2010-06-03 08:23:01 | by kimirin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment and hey ur right that is how I first saw it too. Especially when ur talking abt someone that was never worth it. And also just in the normal course of love, where we have stages of happiness and despair. :p
    | Posted on 2010-06-02 08:20:21 | by kimirin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so very much for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!!
    | Posted on 2010-01-19 19:53:10 | by Krazy - [ Reply to This ] -



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