That poem you have there is powerful.No reader can be indifferent with that piece because that's the natural anger that's in a child from a parent that neglects there child, doesn't believe in their child or puts them down.
It really sucks, but anyway I know you catch my drift.
The first step to writing powerful material is to write how you feel, no matter the way you feel.Then one can follow up with the rest of the creative [censored] further along the way. How bout that for raw ES.
That piece caught my attention like someone clinching a hold of my tie or something.
Funny how life is grand but reality bites.
I'll check you out again..
Thanks for the comment and hey ur right that is how I first saw it too. Especially when ur talking abt someone that was never worth it. And also just in the normal course of love, where we have stages of happiness and despair. :p