Name: Jaymee Vronch
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I'm done with you! by kimirin
Thief by MinervaBlu
Foedadea by Shadowstar13
Doveflight: A Prelude by Shadowstar13
Helena's Lament by Shadowstar13
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That poem you have there is powerful.No reader can be indifferent with that piece because that's the natural anger that's in a child from a parent that neglects there child, doesn't believe in their child or puts them down.
It really sucks, but anyway I know you catch my drift.
The first step to writing powerful material is to write how you feel, no matter the way you feel.Then one can follow up with the rest of the creative [censored] further along the way. How bout that for raw ES.
That piece caught my attention like someone clinching a hold of my tie or something.
Funny how life is grand but reality bites.
I'll check you out again..
|| Posted on 2011-04-12 16:57:55 | by Rex Gold - [ Reply to This ] -|
thank you for the comments, Phantom. you are very kind...
|| Posted on 2011-03-28 15:16:45 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -|
its not about you, dont flatter yourself.
so no Hmmmm interesting.
The reason i shushed you was because Ludtke was talking and I didn't want to get in trouble.
grats on the job.
|| Posted on 2010-06-06 02:52:07 | by MinervaBlu - [ Reply to This ] -|
and I don't know how
I couldn't like it
I mean I just really liked the whole idea of it and how you wrote it
ur really creative.
keep up the good job
|| Posted on 2010-06-03 08:23:01 | by kimirin - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thanks for the comment and hey ur right that is how I first saw it too. Especially when ur talking abt someone that was never worth it. And also just in the normal course of love, where we have stages of happiness and despair. :p
|| Posted on 2010-06-02 08:20:21 | by kimirin - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thank you so very much for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!!
|| Posted on 2010-01-19 19:53:10 | by Krazy - [ Reply to This ] -|