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10 years
Mood: Too much at once...10 years on this website.
That's something ain't it? I owe a lot to this place. The ability of expression, concept, execution and interaction served me well. This place is in me. A part of me.
As fellow user put it "it may be the same location, but it isn't the same place".
His username is rws btw. Hope he's doing fine. Huge influence on me.
I am writing this on a device I could never have dreamed of when I posted my first critiques here. My 1 year old son is sleeping beside me. I truly have seen some shit in that time and it was beautiful in an apocalyptic way..
Yes Bill, you're right. It's not the same place anymore, and we're not the same person and it's not the same world. And that's ok. That's fine. It's totally fine to orbit the same sun. We're expanding further away from the center anyways. A wild ride on this rock it is and whatever comes, I'll welcome it with open arms and greet the asteroid like an old friend.
That's something ain't it? I owe a lot to this place. The ability of expression, concept, execution and interaction served me well. This place is in me. A part of me.
As fellow user put it "it may be the same location, but it isn't the same place".
His username is rws btw. Hope he's doing fine. Huge influence on me.
I am writing this on a device I could never have dreamed of when I posted my first critiques here. My 1 year old son is sleeping beside me. I truly have seen some shit in that time and it was beautiful in an apocalyptic way..
Yes Bill, you're right. It's not the same place anymore, and we're not the same person and it's not the same world. And that's ok. That's fine. It's totally fine to orbit the same sun. We're expanding further away from the center anyways. A wild ride on this rock it is and whatever comes, I'll welcome it with open arms and greet the asteroid like an old friend.
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| And Happy New Year to you.
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| | Posted on 2020-11-15 22:25:02 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Just logged in after 8 years or so. Your journal post sums it up. Are you writing anywhere else? I'd like to keep following your work.
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| | Posted on 2019-01-10 20:58:28 | by Sacred Sindy - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Hey! Thanks for commenting on my work. I am glad you enjoyed the tune, haha.
To be honest, I've been trying to practice getting back into the writing game. That song struck me as monotonous and repetitive, so nothing new was coming to me, and I couldn't help but want to end that poem as much as I wanted to end that song? Nothing wrong with the tune, I just couldn't resonate with it for more than a couple of minutes, ya know? I dunno. Perhaps my attention span is shot to pieces. Ah well. Hope all is well with you, and once again, many thanks!!! -Esha |
| | Posted on 2016-09-27 07:30:46 | by EshyFishy - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Just tried with Firefox. No luck.
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| | Posted on 2016-09-24 22:21:11 | by Ontlogicalamity - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| hey there!
i literally just listed your page yesterday and read your status. It does feel like 2007 again. I guess we are the progenitors of that and I guess we need to keep the fires burning. I look forward to reading your work again. Give me a couple days and maybe we can start this group back up. JP |
| | Posted on 2016-09-21 10:40:17 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Thanks for your thoughts on Technical Writing. In response to your question, no, I didn't mean it rhetorically. The point I was alluding to is that a technical piece invariably has something that much (though not by any means all) poetry lacks: Purpose. And not just any purpose, but typically a purpose much grander than the scope of the piece itself. Whether in support of landing a man on the moon, or probing the depths of the ocean, or the human genome, or just administering an organization of 10,000 people. No single person can accomplish these things alone. Technical writing is the glue that allows such grand projects to cohere. It connects the Why to the What to the many layers of How.
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| | Posted on 2016-09-19 21:10:41 | by Ontlogicalamity - [ Reply to This ] - |
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