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Ah but it WAS positive.
If you look at my latest critiques youll find Im hard to please.
But Im not a biggot,I read a lot of poetry and I can sincerely tell you that yes,because of those lines the whole poem is awfull.
Each piece of writing is the sum of its parts.
If I baked you a lovely cake,then dumped grease all over the thing,would you say:
"it was enjoyable except for the fact you nearly poisened me"?
I suppose that depends on how open you are to analogies.
But honestly "a decent stab towards something great",you should be content with that,its actually very generous of me considering its so short,but I liked the concept,you just left a real bananna skin at the end.
As for my critique,does it really hurt to lie to someone?
You answered your own question,I wonder if you take your writing that seriously,do you want to be lied to?
I certainly dont.
Good luck in your endevours.
|| Posted on 2009-04-25 21:34:39 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -|
Yea I know what you mean. I hardly ever get on here either. Just randomly do I think of something to write..a lot of things I loved don't really exist anymore lol
|| Posted on 2009-04-20 15:21:47 | by Strator - [ Reply to This ] -|
Hi there piper,
I haven't been on here in awhile....how have you been??
|| Posted on 2009-03-12 20:13:57 | by Strator - [ Reply to This ] -|
thanks for the commit on If I could,though I know it does need some work done on it I'm glad so many of you poets found it a delight,once again thanks for taking the time to read it
|| Posted on 2009-02-20 06:41:19 | by adnil - [ Reply to This ] -|
Wasn't from me, I rarely vote unless something just blows me away. But Meh isn't good or lbad, it like srugging your sholders.
|| Posted on 2009-02-08 17:27:33 | by nicodemous - [ Reply to This ] -|
Just wanted to stop by and say thanks for the critiques, I really appreciate it. ^_^
|| Posted on 2009-01-26 01:50:06 | by I_Bleed_Ink - [ Reply to This ] -|