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    P.S. I'm sorry about commenting on only one poem: don't have enough time for two. Will try to comment on another one very soon, though!
    | Posted on 2009-01-28 10:44:08 | by Lacrimosa - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comments. You were right about "Conversation About Mona Lisa". Those two short lines were a little awkward. Thanks for that. I don't know what to do with "Alay's Song" though; I like it just the way it is. :)
    Thanks again!

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    | Posted on 2009-01-28 10:25:10 | by Lacrimosa - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting on Penance. Trust me, I'm going to be editing that one for a while until I love it.
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