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thanks for your very constructive criticism. i loved reading it. oh, and my poem was 'silent being' i made my poem kind of cryptic as to what the meaning was. i like your interpretation. that was part of the cryptic-ity. i planned on the poem being about starts but when i wrote it kind of went a different direction. i like how you think and I'm glad you got a different interpretation than i did. thanks again.
-tricklingrain
thanks for another comment! i really appreciate it. i bet you went through all my poems, cause thats like all i write(only like 5 or so on this site) and were the only one to critique it. Thanks for all your comments to me!
-tricklingrain
:D
Mighty and tall
Standing as a lookout
Slender but strong
Lonely all his life
Until he surrenders
i was thinking of one of those seedlings that blow in the wind. but i like your guess. i understand how that would be like a tree. awesome! Thanks for your comment.
-tricklingrain