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    i've let so many people walk out of my life. what's one more?


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    thanks for your very constructive criticism. i loved reading it. oh, and my poem was 'silent being' i made my poem kind of cryptic as to what the meaning was. i like your interpretation. that was part of the cryptic-ity. i planned on the poem being about starts but when i wrote it kind of went a different direction. i like how you think and I'm glad you got a different interpretation than i did. thanks again.
    -tricklingrain
    | Posted on 2008-11-02 02:46:55 | by tricklingrain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on my poem. I'm glad someone else could relate to it.
    Cheers,
    Giddy
    | Posted on 2008-10-31 01:45:20 | by Giddy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for another comment! i really appreciate it. i bet you went through all my poems, cause thats like all i write(only like 5 or so on this site) and were the only one to critique it. Thanks for all your comments to me!
    -tricklingrain
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    | Posted on 2008-10-30 22:12:15 | by tricklingrain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Mighty and tall
    Standing as a lookout
    Slender but strong
    Lonely all his life
    Until he surrenders

    i was thinking of one of those seedlings that blow in the wind. but i like your guess. i understand how that would be like a tree. awesome! Thanks for your comment.
    -tricklingrain
    | Posted on 2008-10-30 22:06:22 | by tricklingrain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment! your cool and i love your sally pic!
    -tricklingrain
    | Posted on 2008-10-30 21:56:27 | by tricklingrain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    wow eaither u havnt been on since 04 or u just havnt talked to many people
    | Posted on 2008-10-27 23:38:24 | by eagle wing - [ Reply to This ] -



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