--Elite Writer Alias: Porcelaine Name: Sandra Kazalac ASL: 27/F/Croatia Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 1952 Life Story: Exorcism [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 31 Forum Posts: 56 Shoutbox Posts: 4 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4970 D 13.62 Years 1.36 Decades 165.67 Months 710 Weeks 4.970000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: We, soldiers of a different sort, We, wasters of ink and page, We, warriors of words, Masters of melancholy, harlots of the pen, We bleed these volumes, and expect only absolution. - Jarvis Black
I like that you are barefoot. Too many people don't know the freedom of their toes.
Your "Does a soul grow easily?" line stopped me to think about it. It is a line that stays with with me as well as the "I am many lines. As always, I am inspired by your writing.
Thank you for your comment. And yes, it has been hard finding good writes lately.
Anyways I like your take on my poem. All though I wouldn't view the over all emotion as melancholy, I saw it more as an ennui feeling, maybe a little more tranquill. It's good to see that people still read the piece instead of just posting "Good job" at the end of something that you actually felt proud of.
Diminishing your overall feel towards it, if you know what I mean?