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Last 20 Submissions  Kindle entity :|| V: 884 | C: 2 ||: :: : Class : Poetry :  Harada :|| V: 1119 | C: 1 ||: ::Angst : Class : Poetry :  Dormitory :|| V: 1087 | C: 5 ||: ::Dark : Class : Poetry :  Rules of Engagement :|| V: 1103 | C: 3 ||: ::Love : Class : Poetry :  Ascension on a Spark :|| V: 1080 | C: 1 ||: ::Dark : Class : Poetry :  I want :|| V: 949 | C: 1 ||: ::Passion : Class : Poetry :  I don't go home :|| V: 1056 | C: 2 ||: ::Love : Class : Poetry :  Life in an Hourglass :|| V: 1602 | C: 3 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :  Beholder :|| V: 1462 | C: 3 ||: ::Longing : Class : Poetry :  Cold Reminiscence :|| V: 1377 | C: 2 ||: :: : Class : Poetry :  Creation of Physique :|| V: 1181 | C: 4 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  Awake Anew A light {experimental} :|| V: 1362 | C: 4 ||: ::Dark : Class : Poetry :  Binds of Beguile :|| V: 1291 | C: 2 ||: ::Love : Class : Poetry :  Monsters of noon :|| V: 1238 | C: 3 ||: ::Dark : Class : Poetry :  Against Hope :|| V: 1390 | C: 1 ||: ::Longing : Class : Poetry :  Retribution :|| V: 1244 | C: 1 ||: ::Dark : Class : Poetry :  Caretaker :|| V: 1129 | C: 1 ||: ::Longing : Class : Poetry :  Fragile Industry :|| V: 1193 | C: 2 ||: ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :  Therein lies Freedom :|| V: 1383 | C: 4 ||: ::Trapped : Class : Poetry :  Binds of Fear :|| V: 1268 | C: 2 ||: ::Dark : Class : Poetry :

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I see I can not comment on single poems. Might be my stats, since ... since ages I have not been around these realms, where I really know only you. But I'm glad I did today, "come around". I like your "Dormitory" ... like very few minds perhaps you create metaphors that remind me of fractal geometry: they contain self-images and alien-images, they represent and they distort, they relate to reality, yet show images far away, from everything we know by eyes. A little correction: 3rd stanza, 3rd line: I think you mean "than", not "then". 'Till the future. :)

| Posted on 2010-10-07 07:33:33 | by -Lith-Ium- - [ Reply to This ] -

Your work is excellent and always worth reading. It is my pleasure to read.

| Posted on 2010-09-26 07:29:48 | by my shadow - [ Reply to This ] -

Sandra, thank you for coming by, and for commenting on "Beside The Road" and "Where Roses Go To Die". Your comments are always very special to me, and I appreciate them very much. It's good to see you coming around the site again!

| Posted on 2010-09-20 17:57:54 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] -

Yea, I noticed that too when I was on your page earlier, that we are both Sandra K. :-)

| Posted on 2009-08-14 20:47:17 | by Intricate1 - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you P... I am in awe of your work and think you one of the best amongst the many I have read.

| Posted on 2009-08-11 14:41:00 | by col13x - [ Reply to This ] -

You got the gist of what I was going for in "the moon shines brighter", that we are part of the cosmos and affected by it - that mixed with our natural selves, we tend to a more intense feeling of life whether it's love or hate. Glad you liked the way I put it together. Thanks.

| Posted on 2009-08-10 23:03:43 | by my shadow - [ Reply to This ] -

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