Thank you for the comment . 😊 The line breaks I agree, when I originally wrote the piece the margins were wider. So when I posted it on here the margins were off and I just didn't take the time to correct it. I wrote only me instead of I because it was more of a statement. "Only me" sure the proper grammar would have been to use I but sometimes when I write , I like to incorporate a little bit of who I am into the piece. A few words that's aren't really words, vocabulary that flies out of my mouth. Sometimes, it will be a statement I said during that day that made me laugh so I will try and preserve it into a poem for that day. Kinda like a time capsule. For instance flutterby's .... That's me being dyslexic and embracing it. I try to be serious and silly sometimes, the key being try. A lot of people don't appreciate it because they get caught up in the properness of grammar, but to me poetry has no rules. I like that. Nothing really needs to be proper all the time. Just my thoughts on your comments. Glad I made you laugh, I try 😊.