I really appreciate your comment/review of my poem "It's Like You Kiss Me". You're right, it can mean different forms of love. I agree about the rhyming. Although I didn't take any out, I did sort of re-arrange it to make it look more subtle (hopefully).
Thank you again.
Yes, the message was good. I don't really feel like arguing about religion, so I'll just say, to each their own and leave it at that. No, that's true, people shouldn't live with shame, though sometimes that's easier said than done. Gomenasai, I'm sorry to hear that you and your friends are dealing with that. Happy faces!