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     Within
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    Oh thanks a bunch for your comment. I'm not sure how to tweak it either. Thanks for the feedback!
    | Posted on 2010-06-24 20:25:08 | by Celeste J. Bell - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    no I meant happily :)
    | Posted on 2010-05-14 15:02:54 | by col13x - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'm a sucker for good rhyme, and you do it exquisitely well.

    In "Within," I might change the "delicious, tasty sweet" line. It was the only one that went a bit off rhythm to me.

    In "River," I might rework

    "Like the universe, the chaos,
    outside of her door."

    to

    "Alone with the chaos
    outside of her door."

    Still though, I understand that how we read things in our heads is often different from how others read them, so if they work for you just discount my suggestions.

    Overall though I really like both of those pieces. Nice work.

    james
    | Posted on 2010-05-03 14:25:18 | by RisingSon - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    *sighs*

    Now it's extremely hard to be mad at you (for stealing my name!!!!!!) since you've been so kind as to stalk me (teehee), fave my work, and leave a comment.

    Way to make me not hate you. Although I am still slightly irritated by the fact that your name is also Alia.

    Blargh, WHY?!


    I actually love hearing the Dune references! Haha, since I love the book(s). I haven't read the ones Frank Herbert's son wrote, though.

    Anyhoo, thanks for the kindness. :) But NO THANKS for taking my name! Bah! BAH!
    | Posted on 2009-05-15 21:21:33 | by O - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comments on meh poem! <3 ^_^ I appreciate it.
    | Posted on 2009-05-15 18:36:41 | by silverpen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Alia Felton? YOUR NAME IS ALIA?!

    My name is Alia... damn you for stealing my name!
    | Posted on 2009-05-08 13:55:30 | by O - [ Reply to This ] -



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