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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Raistlin Sith
    Name: Raistlin Lovelair
    ASL: 22/M/TX
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    well, graduation is done and I am off to Austin in a few days. I guess this will be the last time I post on here. Take care everyone, and thanks for taking the time to read my stuff.


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    Featured: A Startling Moment of Awareness

     Bipolar
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     embodied tyranny
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    ::Me : Class : Poetry :
     The cycle of "I miss you"
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    ::Nature : Class : Poetry :
     Indiscretions
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     come for me
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    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     Goodbye
    :|| V: 576 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Happy : Class : Poetry :
     if you've got it go ahead
    :|| V: 541 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     baby that's what i do
    :|| V: 610 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Friendship : Class : Poetry :
     The shot missed round the world
    :|| V: 848 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Stray
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Dropping dead weight
    :|| V: 600 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Dark : Class : Poetry :
     Floodgate
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     That man in the mirror
    :|| V: 888 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Nostalgia : Class : Poetry :
     A Little Polishing
    :|| V: 706 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Disappeared
    :|| V: 762 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     I hope you'll be here
    :|| V: 813 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     your victim
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    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     We all fall down
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     Thoughts of divorce
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    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     Featured workA Startling Moment of Awareness
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    Thanks for your comment! You really hit the nail on the head!
    | Posted on 2011-01-30 21:25:43 | by Forgiven - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I have to say that I disagree with your views on love. A lot of the things that you describe are behaviors meant to give the impression of love, but when love is real you know it. It is beautiful, and fleeting. It\'s intense, and when you\'ve been touched by it, you never forget.

    that\'s exactly what the poem is about Raistlin

    thanks for the comment

    :)
    | Posted on 2010-07-28 17:40:05 | by col13x - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment. You're pretty dead on but, instead of someone, think everyone.
    | Posted on 2010-07-25 23:17:42 | by MyWorld - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment. ^.^ I enjoyed reading it, and it's good to know the poem was working it's magic on a string emotional level.

    ~Silver~
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 23:47:00 | by silverpen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I don't think you should have cut up some of the ones you did. I don't clearly remember them before, but I have the impression they offered a stronger emotional connection to the reader, which is absent in the shorter edits.

    Muah.
    | Posted on 2008-03-01 23:29:42 | by Morsketch - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i read "insomnia", "fear", "slightly past my reach", "you know i understand", "and there with you it died", "changes", "never know", and "remains".

    you have serious talent. don't stop.
    | Posted on 2008-02-22 13:18:55 | by narcolepsy - [ Reply to This ] -



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