--Elite Writer Alias: Raistlin Sith Name: Raistlin Lovelair ASL: 22/M/TX Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 269 Life Story: it is what i make it [ Ignore User ]
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I have to say that I disagree with your views on love. A lot of the things that you describe are behaviors meant to give the impression of love, but when love is real you know it. It is beautiful, and fleeting. It\'s intense, and when you\'ve been touched by it, you never forget.
I don't think you should have cut up some of the ones you did. I don't clearly remember them before, but I have the impression they offered a stronger emotional connection to the reader, which is absent in the shorter edits.