--Elite Writer Alias: Raphael Name: Craig O Reilly ASL: 20/Masculine/Eire Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 2 Life Story: Just read the poems [ Ignore User ]
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The guy he's talking about was a welsh literati;) and one tht had a huge influence on him. I think it's a wonderful poem. I could kick a rugby ball aound with you craig. Will Ireland take a Soutern Hemispehere scalp this year?
Thanks Craig... good points... I think I'll put that poem on ice and figure out how I wanted to approach it/what the hell I want to say. I guess I was trying to go for someone who'd been built up by the other and then betrayed them as a result... sort of letting it go to his head and then regretting it... but that's a complete contrast to the original... so I'm six of one and half dozen of the other. Can you sing Criag... and play the guitar?
Hahaha... and you are absolutely right. I did not try... and did not care to. I was bored and felt like throwing something together. But the fact in which you decided to comment on on my poem, in all of its P.o.S.-ness lol showed that you had something more on mind than institutionalizing the fact i did not try. Obvious is it not!!.... anyway thank anyway!
Graig I read your last two and don't feel qualified to comment on them directly, but would like to say that I think you are evolving and making forward progress. I guess some of the references throw me... but it's stuff I'd like to understand becuse it's pleasing work from what I can tell. Some nice internal rhymes throughout also. so there ya go.
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