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Thank you for your veiw on perfection in your comment on "Perfect is a dirty word." I think that the fact that my poem is far from perfect emphasizes the fact that perfection is not necessarily a good thing. I see your point that everyones view on perfection is different and would love to debate the empact of media on the strive for perfection with you if you so choose. Briannan.
Thank you for the comment on -Just a feeling- Even though it wasn't a comment that I wanted. I just write because I can. But hey,I guess I should be polite anyways right I mean you took the time to read it and everything. So like yeah,Thanks.
thanks for your comment on "this is how the world turns" when i said "in flesh it burns" i knew the meter wasn't exactly quite right, but i didn't have time to revise it. but what it means is like, when we look at our skin, it's got scars that stay forever from the world. the whole idea of the poem is that the world is how it is and there's nothing we can really do about it. sure we can put drug addicts in rehab and criminals in prison, but that doesn't get rid of them.