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Thanks a million for your input on my last one, I really appreciate it. I am a pretty solid critic, if there's anything you'd like me to review. Happy Sunday, tj

| Posted on 2007-12-16 09:40:48 | by tjsmith5 - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for your veiw on perfection in your comment on "Perfect is a dirty word." I think that the fact that my poem is far from perfect emphasizes the fact that perfection is not necessarily a good thing. I see your point that everyones view on perfection is different and would love to debate the empact of media on the strive for perfection with you if you so choose. Briannan.

| Posted on 2006-12-08 00:00:00 | by Briannan - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for the comment on -Just a feeling- Even though it wasn't a comment that I wanted. I just write because I can. But hey,I guess I should be polite anyways right I mean you took the time to read it and everything. So like yeah,Thanks. Pixie

| Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by pixie_007 - [ Reply to This ] -

thanks for your comment on "this is how the world turns" when i said "in flesh it burns" i knew the meter wasn't exactly quite right, but i didn't have time to revise it. but what it means is like, when we look at our skin, it's got scars that stay forever from the world. the whole idea of the poem is that the world is how it is and there's nothing we can really do about it. sure we can put drug addicts in rehab and criminals in prison, but that doesn't get rid of them.

| Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks a lot for the comment, but besides my philosophy (obviously shared by many other Western/Post-Modernists) what did you think of the writing?

| Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by Jakle1111 - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey Sammy, Thanks for looking at "san francisco" and taking time to write. This one needs some work and yes, the form might change. I'll be back later to read something. Thanks again for stopping by.. Nan

| Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by nansofast - [ Reply to This ] -

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