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    Journal: Things Change
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    Mood: Scared
      
    Now it's just a matter of time before the truth either comes out or is passed over. Who knows where the road will go now. Where it will end. Where it will suddenly just fall apart and disappear so that you go right off the edge. They say that it's more common than you think, and most of the time someone you know or trust is the culprit. You'd never see it coming in a million years, and then BOOM! it happens. You freeze and you don't know what to do. You don't fight back. You don't say "no". You don't refuse the drinks they give you, you only continue deeper into the master plan they have paved. One minute everything's normal, bathroom break, everything is changed. You're in a cage with no door. What do you do in a situation like that? You can't fly away, but instead, you stay. Let things happen as they do. Once you do, things change. You are different. Broken. Scared and Afraid. Scarred for life, unless you do something about it. Try. Just try and see where you end up. It can only get better. They say you've done the right thing, that you're not in any trouble. But after all of this is said and done, they've still won.

    I know it doesn't have to be this way, but it certainly feels so. The things I've written about, I had no idea what I was talking about. So here is where I say, I don't know how I can continue to write something that started as a freak passing of time into a surreal, fictional adventure. The fact is: it isn't fiction anymore. Now it's real and things have changed.


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    We are on the same page, keep it real1!!!!!
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 22:10:05 | by mistiekidd - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    We are on the same page, keep it real1!!!!!
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 22:10:05 | by mistiekidd - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Rayelyn:

    I appreciate you taking the time to re-read this piece. I am glad that you understood what the poem was about. Depression is a illness that many people face in life and half, globally, are suffering from it and do not know it. Sad, but true.

    Hugs to you,
    Saby
    | Posted on 2010-01-22 00:18:36 | by CaramelCandy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Rayelyn:

    Thank you for the comment. It is okay. Some poems will never make sense. This is about the effect of depression which leave scars and the caps are words that depressed people feel and become larger in the life of a depressed person. I am battling depression something that I had battled once before at 17. In this time of my life, I am suffering some traumatic experiences and it brought to the surface a demon long defeated.

    I do apologize if I confused you.

    Love Saby
    | Posted on 2010-01-16 22:40:12 | by CaramelCandy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, that's probably true... if there is one thing about me, it's that I'm not perceptive enough to read into anything and see what's going on in the story lines... I just always seem to miss the human factor in it. It's a wonder I've survived as long as I have, it's that bad! I mean, I can't tell a serial killer from an idiot from an angst from a rocket scientist... pray for me. All my friends do.
    | Posted on 2009-10-12 10:10:21 | by Runes - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment and favorites addition. Im really glad you liked it, when i can click with people like that, it really makes me feel like what i write is worthwhile.

    It was kind of written as a few completely different rhyme schemes thrown together haphazardly to create the idea, which is more important to me, then the poem as a whole. Which makes me slightly less of the terribly talented writer you seem to take me as. Im gladd you seem to think so, but im not sure i agree, im just a sorry amature making my way the best i can, no better than anyone else.

    Thanks again
    Channie
    | Posted on 2009-10-12 06:40:31 | by dthforeverpain8 - [ Reply to This ] -



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