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    Thank you for comments and ideas about my piece "Altruistic Damnation". I will consider your suggestion, but I feel that I have so much more to say, or so much more that I want the reader to grasp, that I can't justify leaving out that much of the poem.

    corbin
    | Posted on 2008-10-08 18:24:17 | by Lostlover - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you kindly for the comment you left on my poem earlier. It's appreciated.

    I wanted to clear one thing up though. the ending is in no way humor. more of a desperation exclamation.
    | Posted on 2008-10-08 03:42:32 | by ThisIsReal - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I was looking through my old comments for some poems I really liked, and found yours. It was a good solid comment, and I liked your take on my writing, So I was wondering if you ever found the time, if you'd like to read one of my newer poems titled "Soft Spoken". Its a piece im trying to get as much input on as possible, as it marks a major change in my writing style.
    | Posted on 2008-06-25 11:32:42 | by Passionbyapathy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for reading 'The reptile gods'!

    You thought the last line had no rhyme; but it does. 'Late' rhymes with two previous lines.

    Aw, you don't have many pomes for me to look at!
    | Posted on 2008-03-31 23:08:16 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hello back atcha, mr
    | Posted on 2008-02-22 12:11:57 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I understood the concept of Mari and Posa, but it made no point to me that was it.
    To each their own after all and this was just my opinion.

    I see u have been hit by the storm :D

    Take care and see u around

    Viviane
    | Posted on 2008-02-20 12:46:07 | by babyblue002 - [ Reply to This ] -



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