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    Journal: Assumption
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    Mood: Relaxing
      
    All the time people on this site, elite skills, tend to believe my writing is like a historically entry and is true at face value. I rarely write entirely about myself, sometimes things may be comparable, but 90% of my writing is fictitious in a way.


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    Featured: Trust Within Death

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     I Will Not Take to Fear
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     Everything I Have Gone Through
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     Revelations
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     Summer's Fall
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     Weed Poem
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    I wasn't trying to insult you at all. I'm sorry if I came off as rude, but my first comment on your poem was my first reaction to it; and when I first read it I felt that it had a nice flow and held some depth, though I don't feel like going through every single poem and sifting through all of them trying to find the exact meaning.

    And then when you canme back asking for me to give your poem a second look, it sounded as if you were calling me shallow. I took offense to that, and it came out when I commented on your piece again. I could tell you wanted honesty. But if you wanted sincere honesty, rather than me being a dick, you wouldn't have asked the question as you did.

    "Hey, I would really appreciate it if you would check out my poem "Never Lost" again. I know you already commented on it, but I would appreciate some additional feedback. Thanks"

    If you would've posted that, I would've been more than happy to re-read and re-comment.

    I hope we can resolve this like adults instead calling people names and purposely berating eachothers poems.

    Matt
    | Posted on 2011-09-07 11:12:53 | by OneDarkFlame92 - [ Reply to This ] -



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