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Last 20 Submissions Featured: The City Grows  One day older, One year wiser. :|| V: 2436 | C: 0 ||: ::Friendship : Class : Poetry :  Summer :|| V: 1484 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  X :|| V: 1665 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  Someday's Tomorrow :|| V: 1866 | C: 1 ||: ::Nature : Class : Poetry :  Cold August :|| V: 1903 | C: 0 ||: ::Friendship : Class : Poetry :  Old July :|| V: 1979 | C: 2 ||: ::Friendship : Class : Poetry :  Dressed in Wool :|| V: 1553 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Misc :  Ink Memory :|| V: 1603 | C: 0 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  Bleeding Subtle :|| V: 1714 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Story :  Eve's Choice :|| V: 1489 | C: 2 ||: ::Misc : Class : Misc :  Spring Flood :|| V: 1981 | C: 0 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  Gravity :|| V: 1327 | C: 2 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  The City Grows :|| V: 1562 | C: 0 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  In The Wind :|| V: 1637 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Misc :  Cold Like Me :|| V: 1743 | C: 1 ||: ::Friendship : Class : Poetry :  Inherent :|| V: 1542 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  Bittersweet :|| V: 1645 | C: 2 ||: ::Misc : Class : Misc :  Silver Glow :|| V: 1525 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  Beneath Screaming Stars :|| V: 1510 | C: 2 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :  An Element of Toska II :|| V: 1347 | C: 1 ||: ::Misc : Class : Poetry :

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I have a response for you, but I feel that it doesn't belong in my writing collection here. I think it belongs to you, almost - since it was your lovely poem, Summer, that compelled me to write this: The ambient smiles Like Richie's father Before cyclical season. The school doors shut The brothers run away Off, to the lake From the stream They drink Fresh water Warm as mid-day.

| Posted on 2016-05-16 18:59:28 | by MyPeriodical - [ Reply to This ] -

I use to post my art on Deviant Art. But I am lazy and just found myself browsing other works. I am part of a silent revolution to make this site what it use to be.

| Posted on 2015-07-06 14:56:08 | by lori_tab - [ Reply to This ] -

Loved "Cold Like Me," awesome piece of writing.

| Posted on 2013-07-26 03:48:44 | by awastedsky - [ Reply to This ] -

thank you for your comment on "Legend"--- jacob

| Posted on 2011-09-08 14:14:35 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the comment. The whole poem is an allusion to the war between heaven and hell. Satan vs God.

| Posted on 2010-09-03 13:36:33 | by mtg1988 - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi. Thank you for adding Galilee as one of your favorites. I have to say though, I will be editing that piece and the outcome might change your perception of it. But still, thank you.

| Posted on 2009-11-18 02:44:57 | by ANGELO - [ Reply to This ] -

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