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RoulaName: Roula Cardaras ASL: 18/female Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 3603 Life Story: I am Greek. [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 3 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 3 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 6245 D 17.11 Years 1.71 Quote: a kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous |
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Thanks for your comment and the corrections, I had to go back and take some of the apostrophes out because it blurs the word when I add them, does anyone else experience this or is it just my computer?
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| Posted on 2011-03-07 09:59:22 | by Joybell - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Thanks for your suggestions, and for reading and commenting on "The Edge Of Never". I changed the phrasing so that eternity appears only once in the poem; good suggestion.
See if you like the revised version better. And, thanks again for reading. |
| Posted on 2011-02-24 17:51:23 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Thank you for the comment on Decision :D I'm glad I was able to write a picture for you! :D
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| Posted on 2011-02-23 07:41:52 | by PryncessVynom - [ Reply to This ] - |
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oh thanks for the input ill make sure to make some changes, thanks for the comment
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| Posted on 2011-02-23 01:50:12 | by theinforment - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Why would I have a will about such a subject? Who am I to deem... it anything?
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| Posted on 2007-05-11 20:26:58 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] - |
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ask whirl... most of my [censored] tends to be sarcastic and figurative and NOT to be taken literal... I enjoy writing [censored] that ALWAYS has a much deeper meaning... oh yeah, and when you ask her, find out if she has a list of poems that she/I might like you to read. :-)
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| Posted on 2007-05-10 21:55:30 | by psyko - [ Reply to This ] - |