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thank you for commenting my poem "i walked away".. its so satisfying when the message i want to convey comes across very clear thanks for the welcome too!
Yeah when you read it fast the repetition is not that good. It was intended to be read slowly as to imitate the breathing pattern and the repetition is used as a tool to represent suffocation. I'm glad you liked it anyway...