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Thankyou for the comment on "Ice Queen" And I'm going to tell you exactly what I told others who commented on this poem. You weren't right, but you weren't wrong when you interpreted it. The poem did have something to do with love, but that's not what it was all about. I loved what you thought of it though. Of all the people I asked, I never got that kind of interpretation. So, thanks again. I really appreciate it.
lol, you were definitley right as far as too much repitition goes. I was very tired when I wrote this, and so I expected such mistakes, as I usually do :-p. I tried to take some out while still keeping the overall meaning, would you mind getting back to me and seeing if it's better, or if I should take a bit more.