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I revised and updated poem titled:Truth is Bold
Please recheck and let know if poem speaks to you. Also, I am experimenting on Haiku Poetry too. Well, I just like to dabble.
Thank you for the positive energy. I will consider all of your suggestion to improve the effectiveness of this poem. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2008
Hey, I appreciate you commenting on "This Way to Oblivion" and adding it to your faves; I'm flattered And I can see why "Sunday Morning" is a favorite of yours; the style and the message and the philosophy are amazing
The message of the "Dunes" is that once where there was a flat seashore nature thought to build dunes to keep the sea from ravishing (eroding) the shore. Now that there are dunes it can be said there is a goodbye ('bye') to the eroding effects of the sea. Also the 'bye' can be pronounced 'by' meaning there by the sea.