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    Mood: FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
      
    Dwayne: I wish I could just sleep until I was eighteen and skip all this crap- high school and everything- just skip it.
    Frank: You know Marcel Proust?
    Dwayne: He's the guy you teach.
    Frank: Yeah. French writer. Total loser. Never had a real job. Unrequited love affairs. Gay. Spent 20 years writing a book almost no one reads. But he's also probably the greatest writer since Shakespeare. Anyway, he uh- he gets down to the end of his life... and he looks back and decides that all those years he suffered- Those were the best years of his life, 'cause they made him who he was. All those years he was happy? You know, total waste. Didn't learn a thing. So, if you sleep until you're 18... Ah, think of the suffering you're gonna miss. I mean high school? High school- Those are your prime suffering years. You don't get better suffering than that.


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    I tend to write in free-verse stanzas anyway, so I can always make it fit somehow lol. Yea, no worries... although, there's prose-poetry like that which is in paragraph form... just depends on subject matter/psychological angles on why you'd present it like that. I think... the hardest part is linking it all together without losing the 'flow'. Yep.
    | Posted on 2007-02-18 04:28:07 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    All I did was take out that bit you mentioned was spoon-fed and replace it with "Sun-burst: there I was," etc etc. Sometimes it takes someone else to point out the obvious lol.

    Yea, thanks... and no worries
    | Posted on 2007-02-08 23:53:11 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, I'm from New Zealand, part of the British Commonwealth, so we still stick to old colonial attitudes like peculiar spelling and driving on the left-hand side of the road lol.
    | Posted on 2007-02-08 03:20:54 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Oh, thanks for the typo check on "pizzazz"--I never knew it had two z's at the end. As for "travelling", that's properly spelt ("spelled" to you Americans)... and "no-one" can be hyphenated or not. I guess it's a British English thing, although I do spell things with 'z' like "realize" instead of "realise" purely because that's how it sounds to me, so I use the American-English variant instead.

    Yea, that part you mentioned was spoon-fed... that piece was rushed out in less than half an hour last night and posted as it was... I really have to write another piece to see where I'm going, as prose is actually quite new to me still.

    Anyway, thanks for reviewing again... I'm so rushed for time, but I'll definitely get back to you.

    | Posted on 2007-02-08 01:50:15 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    haha, it wasn't really an insult or a compliment.
    i just didn't know what to say.
    haha
    sorry about that.
    | Posted on 2007-02-06 21:58:06 | by BleedingTears - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    and thats why you shouldnt flame Darkess O_O
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 21:22:26 | by (Eagle) - [ Reply to This ] -



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