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response to comment on "she's the one": i have posted a video of me singing this on youtube, you will be able to see how the lines flow better when it's sung. if you are interested, here is the link: http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=UiqFxJWSYV4 thanks again for your comments

| Posted on 2007-12-30 12:22:18 | by zovjraar - [ Reply to This ] -

thank you for your comments. it sounds better when it's sung, the "it" kinda comes in a beat later, so it doesn't really affect the rhyme scheme... kind of like one of ani difranco's songs where she rhymes "glance" with "an-cestors" LOL.

| Posted on 2007-11-09 21:09:02 | by zovjraar - [ Reply to This ] -

You really understood the "Jargon" of Brain Stutter. I was relating to a long string of carpenter ants I watched . They were carrying their eggs through the woods for about three hundred feet. There wer thousands of them. I thought that if we humans had antennae instead of ears and noses would we be so dependent upon antennae. Thanks for your read and comments.

| Posted on 2007-11-07 21:33:27 | by realpoet - [ Reply to This ] -

| Posted on 2007-11-06 21:53:15 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -

Wow! Thank you for your comment on my poem "Rose is a Weed" and for your addition of it to your favorites list; I'm honored! Thank you, thank you! I will make sure that I read some of your works sometime too.

| Posted on 2006-08-10 00:00:00 | by rememberplaydoh - [ Reply to This ] -

*smiles* thamks much for the comment on "Nevember Angela". i so greatly appreciated seeing another one of your comments . heh, i was actually quite flattered. i showcased emotions well...nah-honestly? i believe and have felt so that i'm just as every other ES poet. i pride my vocab, but there are some ES beasts on here as well with a greater wealth of knowledge than I whom I even looko up to, so i try not to take compliments to the head. I've never entered a contest here either because i know of those who i look up to and the skill they posess. i'm merely trying to surpass them, and then i can gloat and be pious and high hearted LOL. but i thank you nonetheless. i'm going to browse through your works, and put in some comments as well k? alright, til next we meet . merry meet and blessed be Loquacious Mind

| Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by Loquacious Mind - [ Reply to This ] -

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