--Elite Writer Alias: Secrets Unheard Name: Alessio Tummolillo ASL: 18/m/nj Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 4458 Life Story: Digital Sea [ Ignore User ]
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I'm going to start writing a series of short stories based on the songs of a band called Benton Falls. So in the description, I'll post the lyrics of the song, and then I'll write my actual short story,and you can compare!
How's it getting crazy? Election and gas prices? I thought it was wonderful when I was there, but I was also just a little kid on a military base. Where might you move to?
Well, thanks for reading it anyway! I always title my poems when I'm finished writing them. In this case, I drew a blank and just thought to note the state. I love New Jersey, personally. I just thought it'd be more abstract if I didn't mention the location. ^-^
Hey, thanks for the comment on 'the mountains.' I never really thought you could look at it that way...put it simply: I meant there are mountains. Gray and cold mountains, like in storybooks or whatever, with mist and fog. The mountains are rising up out of the mist/fog, and since the mist/fog is in the mountains/pertaining to the mountains/around the mountains I called it 'mountain mist..' but yeah, I see how you could say I was saying they were rising up out of themselves.
Thankyou on your comment on A Writer, Ya grammar isnt my bes quality but ill fix that. Also i chose double spacing only because i didnt want readers to be conjested. Anyway thanks
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Where might you move to?
