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    Journal: Benton Falls
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    Mood: Ecstatic
      
    I'm going to start writing a series of short stories based on the songs of a band called Benton Falls. So in the description, I'll post the lyrics of the song, and then I'll write my actual short story,and you can compare!


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    How's it getting crazy? Election and gas prices? I thought it was wonderful when I was there, but I was also just a little kid on a military base. Where might you move to?
    | Posted on 2008-01-30 13:26:23 | by doppelganger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, thanks for reading it anyway! I always title my poems when I'm finished writing them. In this case, I drew a blank and just thought to note the state. I love New Jersey, personally. I just thought it'd be more abstract if I didn't mention the location. ^-^
    | Posted on 2008-01-29 13:17:28 | by doppelganger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, thanks for the comment on 'the mountains.' I never really thought you could look at it that way...put it simply: I meant there are mountains. Gray and cold mountains, like in storybooks or whatever, with mist and fog. The mountains are rising up out of the mist/fog, and since the mist/fog is in the mountains/pertaining to the mountains/around the mountains I called it 'mountain mist..' but yeah, I see how you could say I was saying they were rising up out of themselves.
    | Posted on 2008-01-14 17:58:53 | by dancer-of-words - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment.
    I agree about the profanity. It's not necessary, but that's just the way it came out. I need to edit that...

    Thanks again.

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2008-01-13 22:33:34 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thankyou on your comment on A Writer, Ya grammar isnt my bes quality but ill fix that. Also i chose double spacing only because i didnt want readers to be conjested. Anyway thanks
    | Posted on 2008-01-12 12:57:56 | by Seraphim X - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Merry Christmas
    | Posted on 2007-12-25 12:26:28 | by Dimension_X - [ Reply to This ] -



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