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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I am pretty sure that everyone out there has forgotten about me. So I'll make this short. I'm going to take a break from writting for a while, At least until I have something worth writting about. As of the past year, I really haven't had much inspiration. I've tried to jot down a few lines but each attempt sways me from writting even more. However, I can promise anyone who is still a fan of mine more work in the future.
    Somethings are ment to be fought alone and in private. These are the things that make us stronger, regardless of other people's knowledge.


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    Featured: Man in the Mirror.

     Mirror, Mirror
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    ::Depressed : Class : Lyrics :
     The Watcher
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    ::Serious : Class : Rant :
     The Bone Yard
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     What??
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    ::Love : Class : Random Thoughts :
     Pine Box
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     Anticipation
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     Real Anger Management
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    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     Spaces
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     Always and forever yours
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     A ride on a Pale Horse.
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     These Times
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     Writtings from the Dead...
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     Yo soy mismo
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     To Scream.
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    Thank you for the comment. I badly need that advice! I'm a little frustrated right now about writing because I always seem to find more and more reasons not to write. But I can't just stop writing; It's already a part of me. So I guess I need to stop making excuses now. You're right about everything you said. I'm gonna take it to heart. Thank you!
    | Posted on 2009-01-21 07:13:48 | by Joyce RL - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Haha hi

    Wow... I just reread the comment I left.
    Sorry it was so harsh. Blindly and bluntly criticizing other people's writing is cheap therapy. I try not to be an unrelenting [censored], but sometimes it happens.

    Go ahead and knock me one, I kind of deserve it.

    Rachel
    | Posted on 2008-12-11 05:33:48 | by etheror - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on "Strive to Venture"
    I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2007-08-14 06:46:50 | by theDevilsPocket - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I feel ya dude. I've been having the same trouble, hope you come out of it good.
    | Posted on 2007-04-08 21:21:16 | by Phall - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    you're quite welcome. :) good luck.
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by narcolepsy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i'm guessing you're in the marines? this is so sad. my heart really goes out to you. i read some of your poems and found them difficult to read because they are so sad. last year it was really hard for me to see some of my guy friends going into the military or the marines, etc. and i'm a junior this year and so i'm going to have to watch more of them go again. i know a lot of young men go into the army and such thinking it's going to be great, they're going to be a hero, and then they get there and they realize how [censored]ty it is. you get chewed up, brainwashed and spit back out.

    i'm sorry you had to turn nineteen over there, wherever that may be... and despite how effed up i think our country is and how stupid i think becoming a marine or a military man is... i know you're there to protect and i appreciate that. <3 so thanks. and happy birthday.
    | Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by narcolepsy - [ Reply to This ] -



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